My Saviour

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    • melanie23
    • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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    when my fiancee found me back in the begining of 2008 i was not in a good place. haveing left my husband in the begining of 2007 and lost my daughter (not to death, to my mother) in the middle of 2007, i was well down a very self destructive path. he forced me to hope again. he saved me.

    My Saviour

    I was lost,
    Yet you found me.
    I had fallen,
    And you dug me out of my hole.
    You brought me back to the light.
    You breathed life back into my soul.

    I thought the world would be better without me.
    I thought I was not needed.
    But you would not let me give up.
    You would not let me give in.

    You said “no way, screw that shit,
    Your staying here with me”.
    You held my hand and pulled me back up.
    You made me stand on my own two feet.

    I don't know how to thank you,
    For bringing me back to life.
    For showing me that I was wanted,
    For making me feel alive.

    You are more special than you realize.
    More important than you may think.
    You are my talisman, my rock.
    You are the best thing to have happened to me.


                                                                                           08-24-09 

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    bforibus commented on My Saviour

    08-25-2009

    im trying to think of a character tht could fit this bill nd all i cud come up with is God. very heart felt and emotional poem great job

    Mrpoetry commented on My Saviour

    08-25-2009

    great poem ok keep writing God is good all the time

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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