She May Finally Be Proud

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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ive never thought my mom was happy with having me instead of my sister. this was one moment in my life i thought diferent.

She May Finally Be Proud

The greatest thing has happened.
I have finally begun to suceed.
I am getting my life on the right track.
The sun is finally shinning on me.
First we made it to regionals,
Now we're going to state.
Maybe we will even win there,
And my mom will finally be proud of me.
That doesn't happen very often,
So I'm hoping we suceed that day.
Then I will be the apple of her eye,
And we can be a happy family.


                                                               03-05-02

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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