Enough is Enough

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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dedicated to the one who inspired Treachery and Betrayal

Enough is Enough

You can hit me.
You can stab me.
You can make me scream.

You can burn me.
You can hurt me.
Go on, make me bleed.

I will accept all of this.
I will welcome every ounce.
Just stop acting like you care.
All it does is bring me down.

You are a bitch
You're back stabbing ways know no bounds.
A lie spews from you're lips,
Every time I turn around.

You tell anyone who will listen,
That I am the bad guy.
You say I have done all the wrong.
Oh, what a clever lie.

Well it's time for this to end.
I will hear no more of your lies.
I've taken enough of you're shit,
To last me my whole life.

But I wonder what would happen,
If they saw you're true face.
Would the mirror of equity crack,
If I put it in their place.

Maybe one day you will see you're true self,
And you're false human shell will rot away.
But the chances are higher of hell freezing over,
And me winning a million bucks in the same day.


                                                                    08-28-09

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RebeccaKempf33 commented on Enough is Enough

09-24-2009

damnnnn, very deep and heartfelt! True, pure, raw emotion in this piece.

poetsara113 commented on Enough is Enough

09-24-2009

wow this says it all wow some people are so evil they continously lie i really liked this poem well written

RonicaLeigh commented on Enough is Enough

09-24-2009

I need to show this to a few people i know. It says what I have problems saying out loud. Love it

Tempy commented on Enough is Enough

08-28-2009

I know someone I could give this too, get him to read it as if he were reading it to me, and i'd deserve every word. this was well written, and sorry for your pain. but some times we deserve to hear this. i prob do.

1990lh commented on Enough is Enough

08-28-2009

wow great love the mood of it lots of fire and angry love it great flow and very nice choice of words. we all deal with people like that hey u shoul read my poem the diss lol u can guess what it is about hehe

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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