I've Moved On

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  • Inner Strength
    • melanie23
    • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

    I've Moved On

     Iv'e moved on.
    I knew that I would.
    It just took some time,
    To prove that I could.

    I admit that I cried,
    But just for awhile.
    You thoght I was stuck on you.
    Sorry, that's just not my style.

    I just thought I would tell you,
    That I have moved on.
    I'll find someone who will love me,
    Because I was taught to be strong.

                   
                                                                             2001

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    ripper commented on I've Moved On

    08-21-2009

    Yeah!!! Girl power! (or woman power if you prefer). Ilike this. and I have a freind that could stand to see it. Reminds me of the line from Our Bodies Ourselves. A woman needs a man like a Fish needs a bicycle. kudos
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    Troubador commented on I've Moved On

    08-21-2009

    This is a great poem of strength though the rhyme scheme was a little choppy I liked the way that you dissed him in the second stanza way to go girl. This piece definately proves the pen/keyboard is indeed mightier than the sword.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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