What is Left Unspoken

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    • melanie23
    • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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    my thx 2 andelof death. i dont do a lot of dark poems, my friends say im to bubbly, lol, and a few friends of mine on here said this poem was missing something though they didnt know what. Angelofdeath wrote the last verse in my comment spot and it was so perfect i couldn't think of anything else. so he gave me permission to use it. but i agree with him that since we both wrote this that both our names should be on it. thanks angelofdeath.

    What is Left Unspoken
    Hurt pain and lonliness 
    Are apart of our daily lives.  
    They will never go away.
    And they will never die. 
                                                                     
    You will be followed by them in the day.
    You will be stalked by them through the night.                                            
    They will consume your every thought....
    And tear apart your mind. 

    They will leave an empty void
    Where your soul should be...
    They will make you feel the need
    To watch your own self bleed..

    They will take your soul and drag it
    All the way down to hell..
    Then you will lay beside me...
    Time will surly tell 



                                                          By: Melanie23 and
                                                               Angel of Death

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on What is Left Unspoken

    08-26-2009

    They will leave an empty void where your soul should be... They will make you feel the need to watch your own self bleed.. The will take your soul and drag it down to hell.. Then you will lay beside me...Time will surly tell
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    bluewolf commented on What is Left Unspoken

    08-21-2009

    The work shares words and how deep the impact negavtive emotions have upon one's soul.
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    Ray37342 commented on What is Left Unspoken

    08-20-2009

    I wish that you could have added more to this one, i don't know exactly what it is that I am looking to find here, but there seems like there should be more...
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