EinStud Reviews

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  • EinStud
  • I'm off break, and will be getting to the mail this week. Peace Out, Gary

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Hello. I give 3 reviews per week, sometimes more, but never less. (not affiliated with this website of course). You will automatically get a 10 from me, but in exchange I will thrash your poem and pull it like taffy (a good, clean, fun, pulling). Please remember, I am judging the poem, the speaker in the poem,... not you the Poet. My opinion can only be swayed by good reasoning. Yes, I can change my mind. So good luck. You got your Ten. I am not trying to win any popularity contests! PS A Haiku poetic response to your poem is also provided. The title will include something from your title, so it will be easy to find. Peace Out, your friend... EinStud .

EinStud Reviews


 

EinStud Reviews

 

and you'll hate it

and you will love it

but in the end...

rise above it

 

-EinStud

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(Believe it or not, this is a Haiku poem. It is not in traditional form, but it is limited to 17 syllables.)

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EinStud commented on EinStud Reviews

04-10-2010

Maybe we can have a group of us all doing this same thing and call ourselves, "The Poem Pirates" (continue the island theme)? It is just a thought, and really requires no organization, other than committment (and even then, who would know you skipped a week?)... think it over, let it marinate.

Springsize

04/11/2010

I love your Poem Pirates idea... and so like your critiques, even when they are harsh. I really, really appreciate it when anyone jams a pin in my bubble of perfection and I find I need more polishing... and to be honest, since you do thrive on a candid tone... I'll admit that I have an entire arsenal of bullets for three poems I've found (of which, I decided to walk away), otherwise, I was planning to take them to the annual Mayberry skeet shoot and rip those puppies to shreds and then feed them to my piranhas. But I am a coward... you are not... and really, we need good critiques, like yours... to help us write. Ok now, I did not come here begging scraps of comments from your table of wise, and if Really so, maybe I should have worn a disguise then... but it has been so obvious, who we all are, that there is really no use tying to hide... Why, do you know I once played an online game and mathematically figured out how to whap the system and so created nearly 395 yahoo account names and was to wear the Sybil crown for 5 months.... bad susan

EinStud

04/11/2010

Springsize, you are the deep thinker with wit.

EinStud commented on EinStud Reviews

04-10-2010

On Sunday morning (or so), I'll search for 3 poems if there is no one on the list. I am easy. If you want a poem read with respect and misinterpretaion, I am the man. Just ask me to review your poem. It is direct, but I won't say no. You get a 10. I get full freedom to analyze your poem. I have started as list, and will just start at the top.

Springsize commented on EinStud Reviews

04-08-2010

You leave good comments, I've seen you ... whapping lightning bolts all over this OP place... you are quite striking with good critique hits, giving a good electricity zap. ,, and you have gumption and you wear it suave, with class. Mostly, good poem, real message.

EinStud

04/10/2010

Thanks! I have to be a bit more respectful than I was on the "Poetry Survivor Island" game. Only because I truly feel that every poem has a silver lining in it somewhere. To find it, is the adventure...

MindNumbing commented on EinStud Reviews

04-05-2010

Sounds like a horribly traumatic experience... and one I'm DEFINITELY game for :) Feel free to rip any of my poems apart and know that I'll value any critique you care to offer.

EinStud

04/08/2010

You are on the list.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

EinStud’s Poems (107)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Almost Me by ES 3
Married To My Life 3
Rights without Wrongs 1 2
Which road leads to Heaven? 6
Lay the sleeping dog 1
Lyrics 1 2
Peeling back the years 4
Emotional Fact 1
Time Lost Gathering 1
Eternal Time 8
FIRE in nation! 1
Us 1
One Woman, One Voice 1
D013 Love innuendo 1
Penny Pincher 2
Generation fire 2
Epoch flow ensnared 1
D012 Read to me once more 1
D011 Be first to fire 1
Courageous Patience 1
Recharge, a “Haikuku” by EinStud 1
EinStud Reviews 5
Tree's halo of leaves 1
Thankful Masquerade 3
Big Happy Birthday 1
The Griffin Moon 1
Avalon Cry Wolf! 1
FrankenStud 1
D010 The happiest life 2
D009 Did they even see? 1
D008 One shot for living 1
D007 Knowledge Unexposed 0
The Loving Beauty 2
...silence... 2
Cheat death, render art! 4
Future Poetry 2
What is poetry? 2
Poetry is 2
D006 There's a time for rhyme 1
Where art thou Pink Floyd? 3
From nothing to never done 1
Abundant Delight 0
Fatcist 1-2-3 Trilogy 1
Fatcism Lives On 3
D005 I'm alive with love 1
D004 Kaleidescope Ride 1
D003 Warning Alerted! 0
I've had enough 1
Sea Love 0
Along the sea coast 0
I want to get Hi 3
D002 Let it all pour down 0
The Light Path, by EinStud 2
Letter to the poet 1
Jamaica'd be nice 2
D001 I'll share it with you 1
Catechize 0
Freedom 2010 1
Evidence of Cause 4
Another two kinds poem 6
The Dream 5
Who sees the lie? 4
We want answers 4
Homage to WordSlinger 3
small whIspeRS 1
Minding for Gold 7
I told you so 3
It's time 2
Art 2 2
Blind 3
Let the Standing Bear roam 7
Least Resistance 1
Light the Dark Side 1
Survivor 3
Sidetracked 1
Time 4
Psong 15 Nothing to give 1
Psong 13 1
She's a Vampire 8
Chance? 1
The Begending 2
Psong 10 Desire 0
Psong 9 0
Why are we here? 2
The Torch 1
Psong 18 2
While 0
Psong 11 0
Psong 14 2
Psong 12 2
It Shows 1
Frost Bit 0
Scare Me 1
Autumn People 1
Psong 8 1
Psong 7 2
Psong 6 1
Poetry 2
H8R 3
Be Leave 2
Poem 4 80bpm Who? 2
Poem 3 100bpm You're Wrong 1
Job Well Done 2
Imagine 1
EinStud 6
6. 2
People 0