Poem 3 100bpm You're Wrong

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    Poem Commentary

    It's hard for many people to admit when they are wrong.  But some of the "avoidance tactics" are very amusing at first, but become annoying fast.

    The good thing about being wrong, is that you will discover who your friends are as well as how good of a friend you are to others.

    And that's my 3 cents (inflation), EinStud

    Poem 3 100bpm You're Wrong

    Poem 3 100 bpm You're Wrong




    You're Wrong 

     

    Chorus:

     

         You're wrong again

         You're wrong again

         Wrong, Wrong

     

         Wrong again

         You're so wrong

     

    Verse 1:

     

       You made your claim

       Heard far and wide

       Conviction with force

       Sinks those who deny

     

    Verse 2:

     

       You stand tall with pride

       Truth can never lie

       Reason with logic

       Is the perfect disguise

      

    Verse 3:

     

       You laughed off others

       To raise yourself true?

       Right became your love

       Something Wrong can undo

     

    Verse 4:

     

       Now, you run and hide

       But only inside

       Diversions are planned

       Brings Wrong to Right's side

     

     

    EinStud 2009

     

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    jiminyCRITiX commented on Poem 3 100bpm You're Wrong

    10-17-2009

    This song cleverly runs playfully in and out of what I can imagine somebody talking to a controller. This poem could have amused me through my first marriage, funny thing is...... I was wrong.
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    jiminyCRITiX

    10/17/2009

    By the way well written. I can relate.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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