Who sees the lie?
Who sees the lie?
He only sees truth
in mirror in
Truth sees only he
Haiku by EinStud
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Who sees the lie?
4 Comments
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Poem Commentary
I wanted to try my hand at a Palindrome, and I figured it would be best suited for a short poem form such as Haiku.
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Poem Comments
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Madelynn commented on Who sees the lie?
02-24-2010
- What I find genuinly amazing about this write, is that you performed a perfectly executed Haiku(which by the way,I suck at! lol) -and, you did this with the actual visual of the mirror effect, being the poem itself. I love that the poem, has the reflection perfectly mimicked, when you read it backwards. This little gem really showcases your talent for creative concepts in word-art!-great write!-Maddi
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02/24/2010
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jiminyCRITiX commented on Who sees the lie?
02-22-2010
- Good Job. I might try that, try might I. Wow. That was fun.
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Artie commented on Who sees the lie?
02-21-2010
- Nice - I like the flip and how it works - clever write
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02/22/2010
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WordSlinger commented on Who sees the lie?
02-21-2010
- I like it, there's three sides to the story, your side, my side , and finally the truths side- the truth. ty WS
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02/21/2010
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