Almost Me by ES
Almost Me
fakeness climb as friend
did they ever get ahead?
half smile, then dead
-ES 2010
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Almost Me by ES
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- EinStud
- I'm off break, and will be getting to the mail this week. Peace Out, Gary
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Marsink commented on Almost Me by ES
01-03-2011
- The terms are very defined, but with little transition between thoughts, so this is open to much interpretation. 'Fake friends are dead inside and following their path is the same destiny for you'. graphic phrases in excoriating blazes! Applause building!
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angel33614 commented on Almost Me by ES
10-25-2010
- You are the master of haiku, senryu, or what ever else you want to call it or define it as, I call it pure brilliance and always thought provoking and emotional, bravo! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL- POB for life! aka A blind ma walking...
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10/25/2010
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Teardrops commented on Almost Me by ES
10-17-2010
- Be who you are not what others want you to be . A few words but it spoke loudly thanks Marie
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10/18/2010
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