Poem 4 80bpm Who?

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Poem 4 80bpm Who?


Poem 4 80bpm Who

 

 

 

Who?

 

 

Chorus:

 

Do the pieces make the picture?

Who are you?

Who?

 

 

Verse 1:

 

There's this song in my head

If I sing it, it be said

If I keep it like I do

I'll become another who?

 

 

Verse 2:

 

The list keeps growing

While the dream keeps going

Like a trip to the moon

Won't get there by noon

 

 

Verse 3:

 

Got plans tonight

The feeling seems right

Something came up, eh?

Maybe some other day

 

 

Verse 4:

 

Take out the trash

Bring home the cash

Living life free?

How can this be?

 

 

-EinStud, Madio, E-Man

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jiminyCRITiX commented on Poem 4 80bpm Who?

10-17-2009

A 4 hardly justifies the quality of your poem. Whoever rated you that low I disagree. Your poetry is inspiring and always upbeat. Too bad everyone cannot be as positive as you.

jiminyCRITiX commented on Poem 4 80bpm Who?

08-24-2009

Sounds like a stage play song from "WEST SIDE STORY". You are a brilliant writer all jumbled up in 3 different genres. It is like when Aerosmith rapped 'walk this way' its new and old at the same time.

EinStud

08/27/2009

Thanks. In time I'll get better. I just hope there's enough time. lol!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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