It Shows

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  • EinStud
  • I'm off break, and will be getting to the mail this week. Peace Out, Gary

Poem Commentary

I thought, for my friend, it would be cool to make a video for his daughter's Birthday.  I recalled a time when a Belarus girl had made me a video, baked the cake, wished me a happy birthday, and sent off the video.

I was thankful.  But it was today I realized the effort the World puts in for me.  To give thanks just does not seem to be enough anymore, because I realize "It Shows".

I give less than I get.  And the amazing thing is, I think it is true for all of us.  How can this be?  How can EVERYONE give less, than they get?

I think it has to do with numbers.  I think you could also consider that maybe we are just surrounded by a great bunch of people?

And all that I lack in the balance, is made up for that one magic second when I participate in the World as a GIVER.  It's "magic" because again, how can one second of giving make up for all of that "getting"?

Love, EinStud

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It Shows

It Shows

 

The time that the World

Has spent on me

Is greater than the

appreciation and effort

I have ever given back



And it shows



It shows

by not

Taking the time

to rhyme

This poem



It shows

When something's come up



It shows

When I forget

To turn on my

turn signal



It shows

constantly,

day after day,

hour after hour



And in one second of time,

One magic second of...

Giving



It shows.

It shines.

 

EinStud

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This poem is not a "metronome friendly" song. I did not take the time. It shows.

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One way to get the most out of my "Psong's" (Poem/Songs), is to read my poems with a free metronome ( http://simple.bestmetronome.com/ ).

EinStud knows the need for good free lyrics in music. Often, poems do not transform well to song. Please use, adapt, change the words, or modify any poem EinStud has here, if you will simply just give some credit (example: " ... Inspired by EinStud").

Life is not about winning the race, but passing the baton to the next person in the race.

EinStud is a member of the band "BL8ant."

Peace Out, EinStud

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The band BL8ant is at: www.ReverbNation.com/bl8ant .

Peace Out, EinStud and The Compusician

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Tempy commented on It Shows

09-24-2009

hehe great.... I bet your looking forward to the child wondering exaclty what the song means... until finally he or she goes for there car licence and learns to turn :P take care

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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