To my daughter II

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    To my daughter II

     If I die without a will
    dear daughter
    don't cry for my tragic life
    I have been celebrating each day as glorious gift
    God has given an unworthy mother
    an Angel as darling as you

    If I die without a will
    dear daughter
    don't bury me in the lonely grave
    sprinkle my ashes over mountain rivers
    return me to mother earth
    produce nutrients to nurture you

    If I die without a will
    dear daughter
    don't regret the arguments and fights
    the endless tears and constant cries
    our laughter still largely out-numbered
    what I cherish are your growths and milestones

    If I die without a will
    dear daughter
    don't fear for loneliness
    my spirit is always with you
    you can hear me through nature's whisper  
    knowing your mother always loves you 

    Forever





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    poetrygal45 commented on To my daughter II

    07-06-2009

    love this!!!! Makes me want to write my children something speacial to remember me by. 10
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    susanthewinner

    07/06/2009

    Thank, poetrygal45. Would you read other poems too when you get a chance. Thanks from bottom of heart.

    UnworthyFather commented on To my daughter II

    07-06-2009

    Very beautifully written, Susan. The last two lines of your first stanza really hit home hard for me. I love this poem. Thank you for sharing. 10 from me.
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    Artie commented on To my daughter II

    07-04-2009

    Wow!! What can I say, that hasn't already been said? I love this poem. You wriet as though God handed you his pen. Very beautiful poem, and one of my new favorites. 10 from me.
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    susanthewinner

    07/04/2009

    Thanks, Artie.

    soulwriter commented on To my daughter II

    07-04-2009

    Beautiful sentiment to your beloved child with earthly eternal love. Very nicely spoken.
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    susanthewinner

    07/04/2009

    Thank you, soulwriter. Your comments are deeply appreciated. Could you read/comment "Half Moon Overlook"? Thanks. Truly yours, Susan

    lonewolf commented on To my daughter II

    07-04-2009

    To me, this is one of the greatest poems I've ever read. Loved every word. When its my time to go, I would love to have my ashes spread throughout the mountains. I am in awe of your writing. Very well done.
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    susanthewinner

    07/04/2009

    Thank you, lonewolf. Truly yours, Susan

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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