Windowless Prison

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    Windowless Prison

     How did I escape from the prison with no window?
    I turned into earth worm,
    dogged a tunnel,
    crawled nonstop until I saw break of dawn......

    How did I escape from the prison with no window?
    I formed into misty air,
    flew between spaces,
    evaporated through concrete wall until I reached outdoor......

    How did I escape from the prison with no window?
    I christenized into heavenly angel,
    connected to eternity,
    soared upward until I mastered art of philosophy......

    How did I escape from the prison with no window?
    I tormented into a runner
    conquared marathons,
    endured gravely pains until I crossed line of destiny......

    How did I escape from the prison with no window?
    I imagined like a poet,
    erupted volcano of emotion,
    burned to ashes until I claimed victorious freedom......

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    lesabug commented on Windowless Prison

    07-08-2009

    Mysterious is this writing, you have a very creative way of thinking, it is very different, very interesting , holds my attention to the end.
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    susanthewinner

    07/08/2009

    Thanks, Lisa

    wagus commented on Windowless Prison

    06-14-2009

    Interesting poem the images created in it play on words is well done... I like this line best 'endured gravely pains until I crossed line of destiny' it just stood out at time read... maybe because use to run a lot but getting lazy/old don't do much more than walk to car to go anywhere...
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    susanthewinner

    06/27/2009

    Thanks for your comment,wagus. I hope to share more poems about running in next few weeks. Please read all other poems I have posted here. Your comments mean a lot to me. Thanks again for improving my writing. Sincerely, Susan

    mrlakeview commented on Windowless Prison

    06-06-2009

    I think many can relate the the struggle you describe, excellent! Maybe it will be an inspiration to those in uncomfortable situations? Maybe just a feeling of encouragement to those stricken with fear? There is an escape! Poety may be the start! Well done!
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    susanthewinner

    06/27/2009

    Thanks for your comment. Susan

    Martha commented on Windowless Prison

    06-02-2009

    Great poem but you need to watch your spelling, you have a voice in your poems, n if you have an accent it's being portrayed throygh all of your poems thats not a bad thing though it helps make your writing a little more unique
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    susanthewinner

    06/05/2009

    Thanks for your comment. I am working on my weakness to improve my writing. I like your poems. Keep in touch. Enjoy writing.

    susanthewinner

    06/27/2009

    Thanks for hearing my voice in spite of strong accent. Might I include your comment into my book? Sincerely, Susan

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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