To the man in the past

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    To the man in the past

     Thanks for sleeping with J.W
    you spared me from loving you
    the "disease" infected me since long ago......

    Thanks for sleeping with J.W
    you rescued my daughter from losing a mother
    the loss occurred when I met you......

    Thanks for sleeping with J.W
    you saved me from suicide
    the error nearly took extraordinary lives......

    Thanks for sleeping with J.W
    you taught me love isn't forever
    a fantasy I held dear since childhood......

    Thanks for sleeping with J.W
    you released me from slave's dungeon
    where I was bound with no freedom......

    Sky has never been so blue
    my daughter's face glows
    I had grown over losing you
    thanks for sleeping with J.W!

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    MistyDawn commented on To the man in the past

    06-14-2009

    Thank you for sharing. Your words convey such original confusion yet this realization of what's really meant to be. I hope you've healed.
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    susanthewinner

    06/16/2009

    Yes, I have. Thanks for reading. Good luck to your writing.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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