Lonely House on Top of the Hill

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    Lonely House on Top of the Hill

     Dandelions cover her large bare breast
    burned ashes spell out abandon
    I imagine the rich soil and milky water underneath
    promise a dream garden

    Broken lock on the front gate
    allow graffiti
    trespassing
    vandalizing

    Lonely house stands on top of the hill
    shivering her ghostly body
    withdrawing into mystery
    I hear windy crying

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    Olan01 commented on Lonely House on Top of the Hill

    07-13-2009

    Interesting visual presentation but abit unclear to me the first line. Would love to talk to you about it, sometime.
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    mrlakeview commented on Lonely House on Top of the Hill

    06-06-2009

    I love this! Beautiful imagery! I see it and feel it! Simple and direct, I think I'm there? Well done!
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    susanthewinner

    06/27/2009

    Thanks. You are too kind. Keep reading, glad to have you. Susan

    BDIsernhagen commented on Lonely House on Top of the Hill

    06-05-2009

    again, beautiful imagery. it really ties the reader in, or at least me, to where I feel a small pulling inside, a need to do soemthing about it...funny.
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    susanthewinner

    06/27/2009

    Thanks for your comment, I would like to include it in my book. Would you mind? Read more please. Susan

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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