Midnight Awe

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    Midnight Awe

                                               Midnight Awe

     

    Meet me under the gazebo

    Within an hour to midnight awe

    I will be waiting there

    Waiting for the first kiss

    The first shared touch

    And the first romantic embrace

     

    Meet me under the gazebo

    Within an hour to midnight awe

    I will be waiting there

    Waiting for the first whisper

    The first shared breathe

    And the first gentle seduction

     

    Meet me under the gazebo

    Within an hour to midnight awe

    I will be waiting there

    Waiting for the first moment

    The first shared event

    And the first new beginning

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    writingislove commented on Midnight Awe

    01-17-2010

    Very well written. I love the parallel structure. And how, Noon is the moment of expectaction, but here it is midnight. I love it! Keep it up!
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    StandingBear commented on Midnight Awe

    08-22-2009

    Ahh, the sweet innocence with the midnight awe. *Waiting for the first kiss* .. Beautiful write.
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    lonewolf commented on Midnight Awe

    07-28-2009

    well written. i really enjoyed this one. made me think back to an earlier love.
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    susanthewinner

    07/28/2009

    Thanks, lonewolf

    Hampton commented on Midnight Awe

    07-27-2009

    I am in awe of your poetic talent. This is a very nice poem
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    susanthewinner

    07/27/2009

    Thanks, Hampton. Your words, God's ears.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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