I Care

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    • fallonbird
    • is estatic that she finished The Reaper Man after not being able to find a way to finish it for months. ^^

    I Care

    for so long i have been lost,
    Wandering from thought to thought.
    For so long i have felt alone,
    Hoping some type of happiness could be brought.

    It doesn't matter the story,
    Or whatever may have taken place.
    I just want to be important to you
    And be able to see that in your face.

    I don't care where you've been,
    Or what you might've done
    I just want to be your happiness,
    And to be your only one.

    I can't promise that i am everything,
    Or that I'm not totally sane,
    But i hope you can look past that'
    and help with all the pain.

    If you are hurting badly for any reason,
    I want to heal the pain.
    If you need some one to talk to
    I'm here and still the same.

    I just can't back down from caring,
    From being helpful to you.
    I don't think i can hate you at all
    And you have to realize that too

    I don't ask for much,
    Just the truth and for you to care.
    I'm here for you always
    At least until it's me you cannot bear.

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    looking4life commented on I Care

    10-31-2009

    this young lady has alot to live for if you ask me. her careing words rolled right off the page and touched me like a soft gentle hand. i may not leave comments on all of your poems, but, be trusted. i have read them all. and love every one. steve

    fallonbird

    10/31/2009

    thank you very much. i'm glad that you loved my poems. ^^

    Pensil commented on I Care

    10-12-2009

    What a fine poem. What a genuine, sincere and thoughtful way of inviting friendship. Your expression of good will is an inspiration to even a casual reader. Goodness and sincerety radiate from your writing.

    fallonbird

    10/13/2009

    Thank you very much =)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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