Would You?

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    Would You?

    Would you believe me if i told you that you mean the world to me?
    That i couldn't live without you because i without you i couldn't breathe?

    Would you believe me if i told you that you will never be alone again?
    That you've done nothing, but helped me to become the person that i am?

    Would you believe me if i told you that i cherish your every word?
    That, when I'm talking to you, I'm not afraid i won't be heard?

    Would you believe me if i told you that i love you with my heart and soul?
    That i could never ever hate the only one who makes me completely whole?

    Would you believe me if i told you that you are all i dream about?
    That i would love to make love to you until we were sweating and worn- out?

    Would you believe me if i told you that i would lie forever in your arms?
    That i know you will love me and keep me safe, happy, and warm?

    Tell me would you trust me if i told you all these things
    And embrace all the joy and happiness our love most certainly brings?

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    looking4life commented on Would You?

    10-31-2009

    Hun, your heart must be as big as texas. how could anyone hurt a flower like you? steve

    fallonbird

    10/31/2009

    awwww thank you! many people have hurt me, but i get through it. poetry keeps me sane.

    PRober commented on Would You?

    06-26-2009

    that's a very beautiful and expressive poem babe!

    fallonbird

    06/28/2009

    Thanks =)

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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