I See Us

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    I See Us

     Every time we talk my feelings for you grow.
    We may not be able to be together right now
    but I know soon we shall be.
    You are in a hospital fighting to survive
    and I am another state away
    trying to stay strong.
    You are the one I love
    and I know you also love me.
    You are in a fight with cancer
    and I'm here fighting with my own emotions.
    My love for you will never fail
    and neither shall my hope for us to be together.
    When I close my eyes I can see your face
    and see my hands lifting your veil.
    I can see my life with you in it
    and I see us growing old together.
    There is no doubt in my mind that you will make it
    because every time I close my eyes
    I see us.

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    heartbreaker69 commented on I See Us

    11-10-2010

    amazing poem =) i think it is very well written ! Good job
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    Iliketoflyaway commented on I See Us

    03-16-2010

    beautiful! my favorite line is my love for you will never fail
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    Krystle commented on I See Us

    03-06-2010

    This poem fits with the title.. you&me its what it is you see...? Hehe I love this and its every emotion put perfectly into words the way you feel about me means so much to me its something that could never be explained. ;-)
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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