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    Yes

    This did not happen to me.

    I have something to tell you
    but you may not want to hear.
    I don't know how to word it
    but I need to start somewhere.
    as the first words come out
    you look at me with suprise.
    Yoy didn't see this coming
    but you are happier now.
    As I look up at you
    from down on one knee,
    your eyes filled with tears
    and the word I wanted to hear
    finally came at last.
    The "Yes" that changed my life
    will always be cherished
    because with that "yes"
    I made you my wife.

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    Krystle commented on Yes

    03-06-2010

    I love this it was very well written I think that your a very expressive writer and you get to the main point of the feelings your trying to express. :-)

    Edge commented on Yes

    01-31-2009

    Amazing...that's all I have to say. AMAZING!! :)

    mykhail commented on Yes

    01-30-2009

    Awesome!! I imagine your wife loves this!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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