SEED OF LIFE

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    SEED OF LIFE
    we start out life as a seed
    of love, passion, lust, and need
    we grow inside a peaceful pod
    while cupped in the hands of God
    soon our mother gives us birth
    thus our life begins here on earth
    held safely against mom’s fruitful breast
    content as a bird snug in it’s nest
    we grow and sip the milk of love
    as angels guide us from above
    suddenly we reach for the stars
    and drive a little to fast in cars
    our lives will be of our own
    soon our own seed will be sown
    it is time to write our own story
    as we love we’ll share the glory
    slowly aging always growing
    with love and hate always knowing
    we’re here to live, grow, laugh, cry
    love, learn, wither, and die

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    fathi1943 commented on SEED OF LIFE

    06-29-2009

    Truely a lovely poem from beginning to end. The saga of human life is told in a lovely flow of words and rhyme.
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    organicchick

    06/29/2009

    Thank you....I really love this one too!! Life is so special. I appreciate your comments and interest in my writing. Thank you for your ocmments and interest in my writing. I really like this one too....life is so special.

    fathi1943 commented on SEED OF LIFE

    06-29-2009

    Truely a lovely poem from beginning to end. The saga of human life is told in a lovely flow of words and rhyme.
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    Chrisjan commented on SEED OF LIFE

    06-02-2009

    That is a very cool way of writting about parenting or growing. As your words walk us through the levels of your poem to, the end ! Excellently done. Thank you for sharing.
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    ccslim commented on SEED OF LIFE

    04-05-2009

    Super setting with fluent flow! I like how this is formed from beginning to end!
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    Madelynn commented on SEED OF LIFE

    04-04-2009

    Hey I liked this.It had really good rhythem throughout.good work.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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