ENDING

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    ENDING
    all around us someone else’s love is ending
    while other’s sadly just go on pretending
    be careful of the message you’re sending
    nevermind your neighbor if your yard needs tending
    you’re leaning too far if backwards you’re bending
    keep to yourself the opinions your lending
    what comes around goes around when it comes to offending
    beware the company of which you’re befriending
    contemplate the words that are pending
    broken hearts are always worth mending
    think of death as a beginning not an ending

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    Elke commented on ENDING

    07-19-2009

    Wow! I love this one. It is so wise, so true. I've been away, and this has me fired up.
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    trocka7 commented on ENDING

    06-29-2009

    I liked this a lot, great flow and a really great point! Thanks for sharing, I definitely enjoy your style!
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    fathi1943 commented on ENDING

    06-29-2009

    A poem of love and wisdom combined. Keep up the good work. You have the talent and the style.
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    soulwriter commented on ENDING

    05-13-2009

    The meter and flow work with the continual rhyme, all fused together to form a perfect ending... write on write on!
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    kdarcy commented on ENDING

    05-11-2009

    Yes, alot of work here, well done
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    organicchick’s Poems (28)

    Title Comments Submitted
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    THE WEDDING OF NEVER 12 05/13/2009
    ENDING 7 05/05/2009
    DISTORTED 9 06/16/2009
    HUMAN 8 06/11/2009
    CLAWING 9 06/16/2009
    MOTH EATEN MEMORIES 5 04/20/2009
    THE MORE YOU LOVE 4 04/19/2009
    SUBTLE ARE THE SIGNS 5 07/06/2009
    SHE'S LIKE SPRING 3 04/13/2009
    MUD ON MY SHOES 5 04/08/2009
    JUST CALL ME PAIN 9 04/08/2009
    FAIRY TALE TOLD 3 04/08/2009
    BITTERNESS 2 04/08/2009
    LIFE 6 04/08/2009
    SEED OF LIFE 6 04/02/2009
    SECOND LOOK 4 04/01/2009
    ICICLES 6 04/01/2009
    LOVE DAD 3 04/01/2009
    HANGING ON 4 04/01/2009
    PROOF 2 04/01/2009
    HOLD ME DEAR 2 03/31/2009
    GOSSIP 1 03/31/2009
    BROKEN WING 3 03/31/2009
    A LITTLE LOVE. 4 03/31/2009
    Your Fix. 2 03/27/2009
    A New Season 3 03/27/2009
    The mirror 6 03/27/2009
    The lovely flower. 6 03/27/2009
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