TIME SERVED

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I DEDICATE THIS TO MY CHILDREN BOTH NATURAL AND ADOPTED AS WELL AS MY DEAREST FRIENDS AND MY CLOSEST LOVED ONES. I HOPE THAT MANY WILL READ IT AND RELATE. IPLEASE ENJOY.

TIME SERVED

I love you with every fiber of my being every, essence of my soul

I love you unconditionally completely...whole

I love you forever, eternally an epic amount of time

I love you transcending life spans & consepts

so my love can not be plotted out on some love line

I love you without rhyme or reason regardless of the time, date, or season

My meaning....

Supermely Qbee-Queenly

I Love You Endlessly

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slimgoodwoody commented on TIME SERVED

09-03-2012

Perfect. You surprised me with this one. I can tell you were feelin yourself when you wrote this, weren't you?

therealqb

09/12/2012

Thanks so much for reading my poems and thanks even more for taking the time to comment on this one. I really love the insight and perspective of other poets. I actually wrote this poem to my oldest son who is incarcerated for traffic ticket warrants. He and I had been at odds a great deal before his arrest and not on speaking terms. I began wrestling with that immediatey , once recieving the news of his plight. I only wanted him to know how much I loved him. As so often it does, lol, my mind wandered off and I reflected over each one of my children and my love for them all and out came this poem. Was I feelin myself ? not certain, but I was feeling overcome with maternal emotions that seem to only grow more complex with every passing year as I watch them grow from children to young adults.

Crush commented on TIME SERVED

08-28-2012

i smile because I love when people just SAY IT. it is such a lovely thing. this is a lovely thing.

therealqb

09/12/2012

thank u so much for your words and your time. i love the refreshing way I felt when reading your comment . It cant be said or heard enough honestly I Love You sounds nice ALWAYS because your absolutely right 'it is such a lovely thing' people should try saying it more often when they feel it & mean it

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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