My Rebel Love


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  • Life
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    This Poem was written by my son Tarik McCoy I posted it because I am so proud of his talent that he has kept hidden until now

    My Rebel Love

    She's A Rebel To Love, But She's Not The One To Blame


    She's Been Hurt So Many Times, That She's Just Not The Same


    Heart Crushed Due To Broken Promises And Loss Of Communication


    But Little Does She Know, She's A Star More Like A Constellation


    She's At Her Lowest, So She Still Has Time To Grow


    She's Scared To Show Her Feelings Because She Has So Few To Show


    Its Hard To Love Her Because She Scared To Get Hurt Again


    I'll Be More Than Your Lover, I'll Be Your Best Friend


    Her Hearts In Pieces, Broken, Bent Up, And Shattered


    I Try To Restore The Pieces, But They're Too Beat Up And Battered


    I Ask "Whats The Matter?"


    And I Get No Reply,


    Too Much Pain In Her Heart,


    So All I Get Is A Sigh


    I Stay When To Going Gets Tuff, When I Feel Like Im Not Enough,


    When Im At The Bottom And I Cant Rise Above, When Push Comes To Shove


    She Will Always Be A My Rebel Love


    I Cant Make Her Love Me, I Cant Make Her Miss Me,


    I Cant Make Her Wanna Be With Me, I Cant Make Her Kiss Me


    I Wait, I Give My All


    I Pick Myself Back Up When She Makes Me Fall


    When I Feel Like Quitting I Think Of All The Things We've Overcome


    From The Lies, The Fighting, And When We Say We're Done


    I Sacrifice My Heart Because She Doesn't Have One To Give


    She's My Heart, She's The Reason Why I Live.


    by:Tarik McCoy

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on My Rebel Love


    What a beautiful poem of endearment. What a wise person wrote this, a person full of love and forgiveness. He must understand pain at its highest to give her so love. This is an awesome poem:)



    Thank You

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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