What You Got

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getting older growing wiser i guess just reflecting the wanting what you have and having what you want was actually inspired by a Sheryll Crow song.

What You Got

Reflections of a broken past
Enlightened by tragedies of Holocaustic proportions have been my life's history
Time has flown by at the speed of light rate time, in a way too kind of fast
Has my future feeling shaky I'm questioning my footing
I'm Confused, Anxious, Scared, Unprepared, yet Ready & Waiting for SOMETHING . . . . but I don't know what the hell I'm doing ! !
BUT ATLEAST I AM NOT USING ! ! NO MORE LOSING ! !
SO WHAT ! ! THIS THING CALLED LIVING LIFE IS SO DAMN HARD, RELENTLESS, HURTFUL, DANGEROUS, SELF-ABSORBED, & BRUTAL ! !
IT SEEMS AS THOUGH THE WORLD HAS LOST SIGHT OF THE REWARDING, MEANINGFUL GIFTS LIKE FAMILY, UNITY, PEACE, LOVE, & HUMANITY ! !
To HAVE what you WANT & truly WANT what you HAVE
THINK ABOUT IT ! !
Nothings promised Love It or Hate It so Every moment you get APRECIATE IT!
IS IT REALLY ALL THAT FUCKIN' BAD ? ?
YOU NEED TO RECOGNIZE YOUR TRUE VALUABLES
Before what you GOT becomes That Something you once HAD !!
At Least that's what I got what you got ?

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gregster commented on What You Got

09-20-2010

ooooooo.u told us .now i know what we got...what do they have....ooooo,,ya got served

Rhymer commented on What You Got

06-16-2010

Enjoyed this read, could feel the emotions through out this write. Helpful hint, please make the font size larger so us bi-focaled group can read with a little more ease. 10

therealqb

06/16/2010

No problem I will make sure ITS BIGGER !!!!! THANK YOU !! I LOVE THE FEED BACK !

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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