I Love You

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I Love You

Damn, don't you know what you do to me man?
Don't you see that I'm at your beck and command?
If you ask me, I'll give you all that I got and make a way to obtain the things I have not.
Don't you see what you mean to me?
My heart is locked and you alone own it's key.
Just say the word and I'll fall down at your feet or if it's your desire I'll simply retreat.
You possess the power to rule me at will.
Whether it be of sustenance or merely cheap thrill.
Based upon your wants and needs that to me you convey, anything you ask of me, okay?
Simply tell me what to do and I will obey.
I love you!

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SClark20xx commented on I Love You

02-05-2009

Did something happen to the structure when you uploaded it?

therealqb

03/17/2010

I am sorry for the mishap but it's corrected now , THANKS FOR READING !

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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