The Entertainer’s

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    Just one of many poems of mine about watching the squirrels out back or at a park. I have always loved feedin peanuts and seeds to them and watching them in all their antics.

    The Entertainer’s

    Grey fur exploding through the tree’s

    Like lightning racing in the breeze

    With squawking thunder in loud report

    At fevered pitch through this branched resort.


    As locomotive’s running wild

    Pulling trains through mountain miles

    Nine squirrels race frantic in swift pursuit

    Dart up and down from crown to root.


    Then two or three or four or more

    Will mix it up in hell bent roar

    In a fight you’d swear was meant for death

    As fur is flying you hold your breath.


    They bite and claw and screech in fright

    Within the leaves you soon loose sight

    Then through mid-air one fly’s with ease

    To catch a new branch in the tree’s.


    He’s succeeded in his great escape

    And lived to fight another day.

    So when you’ve nothing more to do

    Just sit and watch all wildlife prove,


    That though man can make a circus, true

    Our best efforts to nature lose

    For they can entertain the best

    When we recline and watch at rest.

     

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    train64 commented on The Entertainer’s

    02-20-2011

    Outstanding poetic representation of a squirrel fight..Excellent writng..T

    Whiskers

    02/20/2011

    Thanks Train, I wrote it as I saw it, true to life and worth capturing for all the excitement it provided. Blessings, W.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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