Iron Men

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Just a short love poem from an old school biker to his beloved mechanical beast of burden.

Iron Men

Harley, throbbing like a beast.

of running boar through thicket's deep;

Swaying through the turns unknown,

reaching, claiming the roads to own.

 

Run's with Bro's that draw all eye's,

to see how the brotherhood live their lives,

The feel of power, the strength in it's weight,

the final freedom, to ride to our fate.

 

All this and more, all combine,

to fulfill our love for this Milwaukee Iron.

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train64 commented on Iron Men

01-25-2011

excellent descriptive story of passion for riding. nice rhyming. Harley, throbbing like a beast.of running boar through thicket's deep. great imagery..

Whiskers

01/25/2011

Well, I wrote it the way I felt it. Sometimes a long lone ride on a rumblin machine can calm down a rebellious spirit. A very calming therapy. Blessings

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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