WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

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    • DavidRayy
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    Unfortunately this is a memmory and hopfuly a future thing. I am still looking for what I thought I found..............aparently I did not.

    WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

    Your warm and moist, my passionate choice, a whispering voice.

    To touch is a rush, a sensual blush, a hot body flush.

    I must have more, open the door, inside I must pour.

    I have the right key, fit so nicely, unlocks ecstasy.

    Once I'm inside, nothing to hide, as we collide.

    Now moving as one, friction hot as the sun, soon the moment will come.

    It comes from within, now deeper I'm in, building to the win/win.

    Your eyes glow bright, sweat glistens candle light, hot, wet, squeezing me tight.

    Long powerful thrust, we're about to bust, together a must.

    You quiver and shake, it is love we make, nothing to fake.

    Your eyes open wide, your hotter inside, I give a full slide.

    And then yes! oh yes! and yes! yes! yeeeees!!!

    A slippery cuddling, our hearts, minds and bodies sing, I think it's my favorite thing.

    Wanna do it again?!      (!) O====3

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    aesan commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

    11-24-2010

    nice! erotic but nice lol rhymes, cool, flow great!
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    CatsMeow commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

    05-01-2010

    Gee whiz what are you doing to us poor single girls? Of course we WANNA DO IT AGAIN!! Silly question, but nice flow and great poem.
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    Fallenangel87 commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

    01-25-2010

    Awesome, Nice flow, the wording couldn't be more perfect. great job. -fallenangel87-
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    IzzyGumbo commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

    11-13-2009

    well done my friend! very passionate write indeed :) love the symbols at the 'bottom' ;)
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    Smileey11 commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

    11-12-2009

    wow its so good! It honestly turned me on. loved it.
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    DavidRayy

    11/13/2009

    Thanx....wanna do it again!! LOL

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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