WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

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Unfortunately this is a memmory and hopfuly a future thing. I am still looking for what I thought I found..............aparently I did not.

WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

Your warm and moist, my passionate choice, a whispering voice.

To touch is a rush, a sensual blush, a hot body flush.

I must have more, open the door, inside I must pour.

I have the right key, fit so nicely, unlocks ecstasy.

Once I'm inside, nothing to hide, as we collide.

Now moving as one, friction hot as the sun, soon the moment will come.

It comes from within, now deeper I'm in, building to the win/win.

Your eyes glow bright, sweat glistens candle light, hot, wet, squeezing me tight.

Long powerful thrust, we're about to bust, together a must.

You quiver and shake, it is love we make, nothing to fake.

Your eyes open wide, your hotter inside, I give a full slide.

And then yes! oh yes! and yes! yes! yeeeees!!!

A slippery cuddling, our hearts, minds and bodies sing, I think it's my favorite thing.

Wanna do it again?!      (!) O====3

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aesan commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

11-24-2010

nice! erotic but nice lol rhymes, cool, flow great!

CatsMeow commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

05-01-2010

Gee whiz what are you doing to us poor single girls? Of course we WANNA DO IT AGAIN!! Silly question, but nice flow and great poem.

Fallenangel87 commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

01-25-2010

Awesome, Nice flow, the wording couldn't be more perfect. great job. -fallenangel87-

IzzyGumbo commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

11-13-2009

well done my friend! very passionate write indeed :) love the symbols at the 'bottom' ;)

Smileey11 commented on WANNA DO IT AGAIN?!

11-12-2009

wow its so good! It honestly turned me on. loved it.

DavidRayy

11/13/2009

Thanx....wanna do it again!! LOL

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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SPARKS 4
MOISTENED SHEATH 9
WANNA DO IT AGAIN?! 7
JOY AND PAIN 5
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BIG RED 5
'TIL I CAN SEARCH NO MORE 5
DUST 6
FORGIVE THEM FATHER(lyric) 2
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THE SPRINKLING---
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IN HIS EYES(L.U.K. 4) 0
TO YOUR EAR(L.U.K. 3) 0
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T.T.A.T.I.A.(
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INTRO TO THE L.U.K. POEMS: 0
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ALL 1
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? 2
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