JUST NOISE

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JUST NOISE

 

TEMPORARY FREINDS, PERMANANT ENDS, MEMORIES FOR LIFE, I'LL FORGET,
HAVE I LOST MY MEMORY, LOST MY MIND, I USED TO KNOW HOW TO REMEMBER

BUT I FORGOT, IS MY BRAIN SHOT, AM I STUPID, I'M NOT, HOW DO I KNOW,
IF I KNOW NOW, WILL I FORGET, WILL I REGRET, HOW CAN I REGRET,OR FRET,

OR PAY MY DEBT, IF I FORGET, YOUR SO SMART, TELL ME WHY, IF I'M SO SMART,
WHY CAN'T I FIGURE OUT HOW SMART I AM, OR IF I REALLY AM,

OR IF YOU REALLY ARE, WHAT ARE THE FACTS, WHAT ARE THE NUMBERS, 1+7 IS 8,
THATS GREAT, BUT SUBTRACT THE PLUS AND ITS 17, WHAT DOES THAT MEAN,

AND WHO CARES, WHO DARES, WHO KNOWS THE RIGHT WORD THAT SHOULD BE HEARD,
IS IT ABSURD, OR BLURRED BY NONSENCE, OBSCURED BY PRETENCE, WORDS ARE

JUST NOISE, UNDERSTOOD ONLY BY THE BELIFE OF THE MEANING,
WHAT DOES THAT MEAN, DO YOU KNOW, DO I, WHO ARE WE, WHO AM I,
 
A NUMBER, A WORD, AN INSIGNIFICANT BLIP IN THE UNIVERSE, HOW MANY SUNS
ARE THERE IN THE UNIVERSE, WELL, ONE, I'M THE ONE SUN IN THE CENTER OF MY
 
UNIVERSE, I'M THE UNI IN THE VERSE, I'M THE ME IN MEANING, I DON'T KNOW
WHAT THAT MEANS, OR DO I, I THOUGHT IT , I WROTE IT, I MENT IT, I'M THE ME

IN MEDIOCRITY, THE I IN IDIOSYNCRASY, THE I IN INTOLERABLE, INCOMPREHENSIBLE,
INCONCIEVABLE, INCONCLUSIVE, INTELECTUAL, INTENSE, INDEFINATE,
 
INCOMPATABLE, INPENATRABLE, INANE, INSANE, WHAT KIND OF GAME IS THIS ANYWAY,
IS IT ALL A GAME, WHY NOT, THERE ARE RULES, RULES TO FOLLOW, RULES TO BREAK,

WHAT DOES IT TAKE, LOOK AT THIS, YEH, IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE ONE EXTREAMLY LONG
SENTANCE, SO, WHY DO I PLAY GAMES I SUCK AT, TO GAIN FOR MY BRAIN,

TO TRAIN, OR FOR INTENTIONAL HUMLIATION, DEGRADATION, SEPARATION, VARIATION,
CONTEMPLATION,INDIGNATION, MENTAL MASTERBATION, WHAT, JUST WHAT AM I

GETTIN' AT, WHAT AM I TRING TO GET ACCROSS, THESE ARE ALL JUST WORDS,
WORDS ARE JUST NOISE, TO POISE AND PONDER, IN A MENTAL WANDER, AND WONDER,

WONDERFUL WORDS, WORDS I KNOW, PUT IN AN ORDER THAT I CHOOSE,
WHERE DO THEY COME FROM, WHERE DOES IT COME FROM, THE ORDER, THE MEANING,

THE POINT, I REALLY DON'T THINK I KNOW THE POINT, OR IS THAT THE POINT,
THE JIST, INTELLIGIBLE TWIST, THE PURPOSE, THE MESSAGE, THE INTENDED OUTCOME

OF THOUGHTS OUT OF MY MIND, OUT OF MY MOUTH, FOR ANYONE, FOR ME, FOR YOU,
TO HERE AND INSERT INTO YOUR BRAIN, INTO YOUR MIND, WITH SENCE OF SOME KIND,

AN ORDER OF YOUR OWN TO FIND, AND TO BIND, WITH YOUR OWN MIND,
AND LEAVE BEHIND, JUST FOR A MOMMENT, WHATEVER YOU WERE THINKING AT THE

INSTANT YOU BEGAN TO HEAR THIS OR READ THIS, THAT KINDA MESSES WITH YOUR HEAD,
TO HEAR WHAT I SAID, IN WHAT YOU READ, AS MY THOUGHTS BLED,
 
ONTO THE PAGE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT, SIMPLY 'CAUSE I CAN NOT SLEEP,
IN THIS PLACE, IN THIS SPACE, IN THIS RACE, RACE TO WHAT FINISH,
 
FIRST TO SNAP, FIRST TO GET A GRIP, FIRST TO FIGURE OUT SOME
PUZZLE NO ONE ELSE HAS, FIRST TO FIND OUT WHO I AM, WHAT I AM, WHERE I AM,

WHY I AM, IF I AM, FIRST TO GET THE ANSWERS TO EVERY SINGLE QUESTION
I'VE, EVER ASKED AND STILL HAVEN'T GOTTEN, THAT'S ALOT OF QUESTIONS,

NOW WOULD BE A GOOD TIME,
SO CAN I PLEASE GET SOME ANSWERS HERE,
WITHOUT FEAR,
WITHOUT TEAR,
WITHOUT SNEER,
WITHOUT JEER,
WITHOUT LEER,
WITHOUT,
WITHIN.

 

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IzzyGumbo commented on JUST NOISE

09-07-2009

:) Are you talking to me talking to you???????.....

Forestbird commented on JUST NOISE

05-26-2009

Sorry I can not comprehend. I like clear and minimalistik style This stupid website make me tell more , because it request 100 words. I do not have much more to say Let me know when you post something else

DavidRayy

05/27/2009

new post, chek it out

dahlusion commented on JUST NOISE

05-26-2009

This is a brain full of disjointed imagery that is hard for me to follow in a direction of clarity which is neither good nor bad, just my honest opinion. Let me know when you have posted more. Peace.

DavidRayy

05/27/2009

thats exactly what its suposed to be....life in general is confusing and hard to follow somtimes that poem was like an angry vomit of thoughts and feelings. only to make sence to the ones who make sence of it, which you nailed w/disjointed imagery. the point, words are just noise, to be interpreted by each person(even if slightly)differently.

Hampton commented on JUST NOISE

05-21-2009

A poetic zigsaw puzzle that I am sure carries significant meaning to the composer but left me somewhat wanting for clarity. The title may carry the key.

DavidRayy

05/27/2009

YES!! the title is the key, its ment to be confusing. life in general is confusing and hard to follow somtimes that poem was like an angry vomit of thoughts and feelings. only ment to make sence to the ones who make sence of it. WORDS ARE "JUST NOISE" to be interpreted by each person differently, even if just slighty.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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