BIG RED

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    BIG RED


    TEARS OF A CLOWN, UNDER HAPPY SOUND, MAKE UP ON HIS FACE.
    BIG RED KNOWS, TRUTH AS IT GOES, THE COVER UP, IN PLACE.
     
    DEEP INSIDE, WHATS TO HIDE, UNDERNEATH A PAINTED SMILE.
    LAUGHTER FOR HIRE, PLEASE THE BUYER, HAPPINESS ON TRIAL.
     
    NO ONE CAN SEE, THE SADNESS THAT BE, WHAT THE LAUHGTER'S FOR.
    HE'LL WAKE UP TOMMOROW, TO DROWN THE SORROW, PAINT IT ON ONCE MORE.

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    Watercolor commented on BIG RED

    10-01-2009

    Okay, I figured that out. Should have rated it higher. New at this, sorry. Shelley

    Watercolor commented on BIG RED

    10-01-2009

    I like this one. I haven't read all of your yet. Where do I rate this?

    Hampton commented on BIG RED

    09-14-2009

    A sad soul hidden behind a mask of sorrow.........

    IzzyGumbo commented on BIG RED

    09-07-2009

    outstanding poetry my friend...........................................

    cottoncandi commented on BIG RED

    08-25-2009

    I like this i think everyone paints a clown face everyday and we hide behind our true sorrow great read

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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