NOTE TO SELF

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    NOTE TO SELF

    NOTE TO SELF:

    IF I'M READING THIS AND I DON'T SEE ME HERE,
    THEN I'VE GONE TO FIND MYSELF. SO I'LL LEAVE.
    IF I GET BACK BEFORE I RETURN, THEN I'LL WAIT HERE FOR ME.
    I HOPE WHEN I ARRIVE I'VE BROUGHT MYSELF WITH,
    SO I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT. AND IF, WHILE I'M GONE,
    I DECIDE NOT TO COME BACK, THEN REMIND ME TO TEAR UP THIS NOTE.

                                                                                                ME

     

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    IzzyGumbo commented on NOTE TO SELF

    09-07-2009

    Hey Me. It's Me. I have a CC to this note. Now how did that happen?

    Hampton commented on NOTE TO SELF

    06-09-2009

    I cleverly conceived message of searching for one's self while hidden from view in a cloak of human emotional transparency.

    DavidRayy

    06/13/2009

    NICE LINE!!

    dahlusion commented on NOTE TO SELF

    06-02-2009

    This is surrealist brilliance in all of its poetic mind seeding as if the words eat themselves, only to eat themselves again.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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