NOTE TO SELF

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    NOTE TO SELF

    NOTE TO SELF:

    IF I'M READING THIS AND I DON'T SEE ME HERE,
    THEN I'VE GONE TO FIND MYSELF. SO I'LL LEAVE.
    IF I GET BACK BEFORE I RETURN, THEN I'LL WAIT HERE FOR ME.
    I HOPE WHEN I ARRIVE I'VE BROUGHT MYSELF WITH,
    SO I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT. AND IF, WHILE I'M GONE,
    I DECIDE NOT TO COME BACK, THEN REMIND ME TO TEAR UP THIS NOTE.

                                                                                                ME

     

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    IzzyGumbo commented on NOTE TO SELF

    09-07-2009

    Hey Me. It's Me. I have a CC to this note. Now how did that happen?
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    Hampton commented on NOTE TO SELF

    06-09-2009

    I cleverly conceived message of searching for one's self while hidden from view in a cloak of human emotional transparency.
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    DavidRayy

    06/13/2009

    NICE LINE!!

    dahlusion commented on NOTE TO SELF

    06-02-2009

    This is surrealist brilliance in all of its poetic mind seeding as if the words eat themselves, only to eat themselves again.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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