Happy?

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  • Happiness

    Happy?

    Happy?

    Lonely.

    Hoping.

    Wondering.

    Wishing.

    Looking?

    Looking.

    Looking!

    see.

    see.

    see.

    see?

    see.

    see.

    see!

    LOOK!!

    Find?

    Hope.

    Acquaint.

    Like!

    Like!!

    Like!!!

    LOVE!!!!

    Found.

    Happy.

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    FranzJ commented on Happy?

    04-20-2010

    definitely though provoking and clever -- - - - - - - - -

    secretkiss commented on Happy?

    04-19-2010

    This is fun! I really enjoyed the work. Intresting pattern.

    DavidRayy

    04/20/2010

    I do enjoy when I rarely get away from my "norm" this is a fav of mine. Unfortunately it didn't turn out to be a reality, and still am not................

    Singing commented on Happy?

    11-11-2009

    great style!!!! It is the first time for me seen so simple but deeply meaning poem! Thank you DavidRayy.please come on

    dahlusion commented on Happy?

    09-16-2009

    A simply cute little gem of a poem that tickles the reader from the beginning to the end. Beautiful message!

    IzzyGumbo commented on Happy?

    09-15-2009

    !like for sure! I like the term Hampton uses, waterfall poem... yes. A nice curve like a cute figure and single words like an adorable crush that overwhelms. I love it and you get the purple light saber ... ;)

    DavidRayy

    09/15/2009

    thank u !!! i'm so glad its being liked by uthrz!!!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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