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(title)BY THE BRIDGE AND THE RIVER SITTIN' IN MY 1980 PONTIAC PHOENIX THAT I ONLY PAID $200 FOR, IN BEAUTIFUL KALISPELL MONTANA

 


WE'RE ALL IN IT ALL, BIG AND SMALL,THINGS TO BE WILL BE,
ALL THE WALLS, FEEL THE FALLS, WAIT TO SEE WHAT NEXT YOU'LL SEE.

ALL I KNOW, IS I'M NOT SURE WHAT I KNOW, IT'S NO SURPRISE TO BE CONFUSED,
DO WE REALLY THINK WE KNOW, WHO WE THINK WE REALLY KNOW, DID WE LOSE.

I HAVE A TASK, YOU DON'T KNOW, SO WHO TO ASK, WHY AND WHAT'S IT ALL FOR,
WILL THE CLOUDS EVER CLEAR, WILL WE GET OUTTA HERE, WILL THE EAGLE ALWAYS SORE.

THERE'S LOVE, AND THERE'S LOST, AT SUCH A COST, WITH LITTLE TO INVEST,
THE TINY SHIP WAS TOSSED,  MAYBE SKIPPER WAS SAUSED, PERHAPS HE WAS STRESSED.

WHAT DOES IT MEAN, ASK ME IN A DREAM, MAYBE THEN THE ANSWER'S REAL.
IS ANYTHING WHAT IT MAY SEEM, DO WE SEE WHAT WE'VE SEEN, IS THAT REALLY HOW YOU FEEL.

LIFE'S A TRIP, GET A GRIP, THIS IS THE ADVENTURE OF A LIFE TIME,
NO BOO-BOO-LIP, GET ON YOUR SHIP, AND GET READY FOR THE CLIMB.

TAKE ONLY WHAT YOU NEED, GET A COMFORTABLE SPEED, THEN JUST RELAX,
WE CAN ENJOY THIS TIME INDEED, WITHOUT THE EVIL GREED, AND THAT IS SIMPLY, THE FACTS.


 

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AbysmalGoddess commented on (title below,wont fit here)

06-20-2009

This...was hard for me to follow, very well put together, versed and rhymed, but difficult to find the point. I guess it could be many, or just one... Montana, it's beautiful, very inspiring to poets. I live in Idaho, one over, and I know how nature's beauty can overwhelm!

Hampton commented on (title below,wont fit here)

06-02-2009

Hi friend. This work flows in a machine gun like stream of ideas and thoughts that draw one forward. Nice.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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