War

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    War

     Give me a kiss it is going to be okay
    I don't want to but I have to go away
    Send me some pictures and I will send you some
    while I am gone try and have a little fun
    You are in my heart and in my prayers
    Where ever I may go you will always be there
    There will be fighting, there will be guns
    There will be parents loosing their loved ones
    I promise you that I will be back
    I have to go to a place called IRAQ
    Dad, we want you to know we are proud of you
    We understand what you have to do
    While you are gone we will still keep in touch
    We hope you know that we love you so much

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    FLAWLES commented on War

    06-06-2009

    Yo J, this is very nice. I really don't know what to say; and I've pretty much had alot to say about so much.
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    jlovett05

    06/06/2009

    my brother is in the military and will eventually go to iraq. he has like two years left i believe then he retires. he said he might stay in longer because of the economy. it's just sad to see the loved ones either not come home alive or completely changed forever.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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