IF YOU LOOK AT ME!!!

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    IF YOU LOOK AT ME!!!

    IF YOU WERE TO LOOK AT ME
    THIS IS WHAT YOU WOULD SEE
    A HAPPY BUBBLY BLUE EYED GIRL
    OH, GOD THAT I WISH I WERE

    IF YOU LOOK A LITTLE DEEPER INSIDE
    YOU JUST MIGHT SEE THE TEARS I HIDE
    THE ONES THAT I DON'T WANT TO SHOW
    BECAUSE NO ONE NEEDS TO KNOW

    THERE ARE TIMES I WISH I WOULD DIE
    DON'T ASK ME I DON'T KNOW WHY
    I HAVE EVERYTHING A WOMAN COULD NEED
    I DON'T HAVE TO WANT FOR ANYTHING

    TELL ME BABY HOW DO I GO ON?
    HOW DO I HOLD MY HEAD UP STRONG?
    CAN SOMEONE HELP ME THROUGH THIS PAIN
    OR AM I GONNA DROWN IN ALL THIS RAIN

    AND IF MY LIFE I WERE TO TAKE
    HOW MANY HEARTS WOULD I ACTUALLY BREAK?
    WOULD ANYONE EVEN REALLY CARE?
    WOULD THEY NOTICE THAT I AM NOT HERE?

    TAKE SOME PILLS THEN HAVE A DRINK
    LAY DOWN FOR A WHILE AND DOZE OFF TO SLEEP
    NO PAIN, NO GAIN, IS WHAT PEOPLE WOULD SAY
    BUT, I AM TIRED OF FEELING THIS WAY

    I HAVE TWO BEAUTIFUL KIDS THAT I ADORE
    NOBODY COULD EVER LOVE THEM MORE
    THEY WOULD CRY, AND THEY WOULD BE SAD
    BUT ATLEAST THEY WILL STILL HAVE THEIR DAD

    SO, IF TONIGHT MY LIFE MIGHT END
    THIS IS THE MESSAGE I WANT TO SEND
    I LOVE YOU ALL SO VERY DEAR
    I AM WITH GOD NOW AND HAVE NO MORE TEARS

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    FLAWLES commented on IF YOU LOOK AT ME!!!

    06-14-2009

    I'm not too sure why; but I do like this poem. It seems like there is a message here that I hope doesn't become a reality.
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    jlovett05

    06/14/2009

    THIS WILL NOT BECOME REALITY LIFE IS TOO PRECIOUS.. THERE ARE PEOPLE OUT THERE WHO DO MAKE THIS BECOME REALITY AND IT'S SAD.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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