Foolhardy

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Foolhardy

If I were free to choose,

The man I should love,

Desire and need. Dream of at night

And pray I would never lose.

 

I would never have chosen you.

 

I thought you were a marble

Clad figure, godly and perfect,

A dynamite specimen of

Indolent manhood incarnate.

 

I was wrong I knew, I always did.

 

I hoped and wished,

Desired in my sanctum of womanhood,

You would be the one to steal

Me away from heartbreak.

 

The worst fool is a fool in love.

 

It emerged, before the paint,

Green and gold,

On the walls of our home together,

Were dry.

 

That I was in love with a façade and a fake.

 

You were never destined

To be my knight,

My amorous lover,

Loyal night after night.

 

A man who asks for freedom really should remember,

That for every heart broken, there is one less woman to love.

 

This heart is felled,

Cloven in twain,

I love a lost love,

Never to love you again.

 


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ginga commented on Foolhardy

12-31-2010

narrator, The angst here is so clearly spoken, so succinctly bereaved. ginga

Narrator

01/01/2011

Thank you so much once again! The pain of the heart can sometimes be the greatest pain of all. As ever, humbled by your comments, they are very much appreciated. Narrator.

kdarcy commented on Foolhardy

12-25-2010

Here here, very well done, these words hold much truth, I recognize some of those sentiments, be well, very nice k

Narrator

12/28/2010

Thank you so much for taking the time to look this over and leave a comment, much obliged. I think anyone who has know love will have endured a little heartache. Narrator.

HIP13044b commented on Foolhardy

12-24-2010

This is a well written piece. You incorperated some difficult vocabulary, and made it work well.

Narrator

12/24/2010

Thank you once again for reading and commenting :) Much obliged to you. I love playing with language and this one very much just flowed straight from the pen so to speak :). Narrator.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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