Please Realize

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    Please Realize

    If I lose you today,

    I have nothing to fear tomorrow

    If I push you away

    I need not wither with sorrow.

     

    Do you understand now?

     

    If I lock up my heart and put out the light,

    If I say with my own lips I never loved you,

    If I give you up without a fight,

    Then I need not curse the inevitable adieu.

     

    Do you comprehend me?

     

    Had I from the conception,

    Forbid myself to fall in love and dare to hope,

    Realised my folly upon reflection,

    I should have set myself, beyond your gentle scope.

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    raziel69 commented on Please Realize

    08-20-2010

    Great write, i have felt these feeling many times. loved it...Raz
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    Narrator

    08/20/2010

    Thank you Raz! I know, the path of love never did run smooth... but sometimes, just sometimes, you meet someone who makes it all worth it :). Narrator.

    stellar commented on Please Realize

    07-14-2010

    keep the creative pen flowing.....lovely write...............^_^ v
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    Narrator

    07/15/2010

    Again, many thanks for taking the time to read, much obliged to you :)

    Tigcateyes commented on Please Realize

    07-10-2010

    Wow! I mean wow! This is powerful and knife edged and I love it! Keep'm coming! Blessed Be
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    Narrator

    07/11/2010

    Thank you so very much! So glad you liked it! Narrator.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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