Blanket

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    this is for Blanket.... She stole my pic to have some fun so I wrote this for her.....

    Blanket

    I have this Blanket... I'm all rapped up in..... Here I sit..... Living in sin..... I wiggle and worm.... Deep inside..... I guess my tounge might slide..... Down my blanket of warmth.... I'll cuddle it hold it.... I guess since birth... I've been this way.... With my Blanket I shall lay.... Hold it tight.... Hold it near..... Blankets are for me dear..... I sit all wrapped up in you... My blanket and me..... We make too

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    Insideme commented on Blanket

    02-09-2010

    we all have our "blankets" thanks for writing this, way to go.

    redbloodink

    02/09/2010

    ty ..... this was for another poet here.........

    ginga commented on Blanket

    12-27-2009

    Red, The cocoon gives shelter and comfort, as well as warmth. This poem certainly reaches out and lends its warm and fuzzies to all who read it. ginga

    Mareann commented on Blanket

    12-26-2009

    Through your words written here, we can understand the mind of a child much better, good write... Mary

    MrGee commented on Blanket

    12-23-2009

    This is Terrific! Concise and well thoughtout poem. And would you believe as a child I had a security blanket lol. anyway, this poem is a defintei 10

    redbloodink

    12/23/2009

    I didn't think it was that good.... wow ty for letting me take you back intime....red

    redbloodink

    12/23/2009

    p.s. I have to write another one for Blanket now....

    Teardrops commented on Blanket

    12-22-2009

    I like this one and your own world you own blanket . good read

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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