ALONE

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ALONE

Have you ever felt alone.....?
Been super cold and hungery.......
Left on hold on the phone.......
Feeling a little sad and angry.....

Felt like no-one cared......
Enough to even smile at you......
Been down and scared.....
Feeling and thinking what is true!!!!!!

Standing off in your own lil corner.....
Looking at the world around you...
Just wanting to lay down......
Wondering what to do.....

I've been there myself........
Living what I thought was a dream.....
Pictures of us on the shelf.....
I use to wake up and scream.....

Then one day He found me......
As I sat in that cell......
He surely made me see......
I made my own hell.....

So now I just live each day.....
As if it was my last.....
I'm finding my way......
Walking away from my past!!!!!!

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banginmoma commented on ALONE

12-23-2009

i def know that feeling. again i like the way you draw me into your work. very good write. thank you for sharing

redbloodink

12/23/2009

I'm glad you liked them Bang ty for the comments

redbloodink

12/23/2009

I'm glad you liked them Bang ty for the comments

HopeOhlarik commented on ALONE

12-02-2009

yea i know that feeling =S it isnt easy to be there, but walkin away from it is hard to do. comfert is what you find in the corner, and leaving that comfert is hard. but when you do the heavens rejoice because your living again! goin to favs definately!

redbloodink

01/31/2010

ty Hope........ I always love your comments......

tonid commented on ALONE

11-28-2009

Beautifuly written. I have been down the path of self loathing, and have been lost. Thank you for sharing this poem, Blessings, Tonid

redbloodink

01/31/2010

ty Toni for reading my work........ Blessings to you....

aweems commented on ALONE

11-24-2009

WOW!! WHAT CAN I SAY THIS FEELS REAL FOR ME . I FEEL LIKE I AM APART OF THIS POEM . IT NICE

redbloodink

01/31/2010

I'm glad you felt it.... thanks for reading.....

inkmaster commented on ALONE

11-24-2009

nice write I enjoyed it......................................................inkmaster

redbloodink

01/31/2010

Ink ty for all the kindness and comments on my work.....

inkmaster

01/31/2010

Thanks for all your reads, and comments also Red..I value your opions,and comments...~Inkmaster~

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

redbloodink’s Poems (211)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Let Me ....... Share .... Care and write again.... 7
Night or Day 1
I once was 2
A Silent Shot 9
I Find it, in My Mind 4
A Freezing Night!!!!!! under Your moon light 3
THANKS-GIVING 3
Other Fashion 2
Mankind!!!!!!
!!
5
I Refuse 5
Book 2 2
A BOOK 9
Last One 4
Realize 1
Twist of Faith 1
Race of Faith.......! 0
If all I had to say 1
Never Die........( I'm just saying ) 0
A real Human 1
And That Is That! 6
What's a Crappy Day 5
Soles of the Streets 1
The Heavens 1
Heard the Call 1
FOREVER TOGETHER! 2
Writting Away 1
Am I 1
What More 2
Away 4
Healed Me 3
Inside-Out 3
Elated 4
The Cat 4
Do You? 1
Is She 4
The God Zone 1
Up Early 4
Not Me 4
Popular 2
ABBA 2
O.P. INSPIREATION 7
Define Work..... 5
Bleed for the Need 6
No pain behind my walls 2
!I DO! 3
Time 2
Haircondition
er vs Airconditione
r
4
My Heart 4
LOSS OF LOVE 2
My Every-thing..
.......
1
BAD DREAM 2
Redefine 1
Intense 4
My Goal 8
I FIND 2
ERASED THIS 9
Mistress vs. Slave 9 4
Mistress vs. Slave 8 8
STRINGS 5
Imperfect Human 15
Mistress vs. Slave # 7 1
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 6 3
(((((((((( UNFOLDING )))))))) REVISED 4
MISTRESS vs. SLAVE # 5 2
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 4 3
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 3 5
Obscure 3
back again and is still here 1
Is still here 2
THE HOUR GLASS ( of the sands ) 2
YOU_SEE 8
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE 7
RANT 6
i try 3
!INDIFFERENT! 4
YOUR TIME 5
Comic Book 2
Pass By 0
EROTIC NIGHT 4
LIL" SONG 0
TOO SEE 3
Faith not Religion 7
ALL ALONE 5
REMEMBER 5
FIND 3
TTOTA,the trip of them all! 3
not done because 2
I Say! 6
Behind 4
MISSED 4
IT STINKS 6
TWO 3
FOR SURE 2
DEMONS COME 5
A Lovers Plea..... 7
Time Continuum 2
I Sit 2
Poetic Justice 5
Mistress vs. Slave 12
free-style 4
LOVE! after drinking.....
.
6
EACH_OTHER 8
MANY BLESSINGS 4
Faceless they become 5
COMMENTS & WRITINGS 3
YOURS' OR MINE 2
BLANK 2
LOVE DANCE! 6
FLY AWAY 5
A Killer 7
EROTIC TONIGHT 5
WINDOW OF TIME 4
Hundred 4
RUN WAY 2
BOLD 7
SOUL 2
Take 5
It's Love 2
Found Love..... 3
OriginalPoetr
y.Com
4
YET or NOT YET 2
STRAIGHT 4
MISTAKEN ALL HER LIFE 6
( Heard ) They must of....... 3
OP.COM 2
JUST STOPPED 4
what 5
DECISIONS!!!!
!
4
Destorted 4
HIS VOICE 4
A Christmas Greeting.... 3
Decisions of Frustration Frustrating 3
Blanket 5
Take Me Back 2
Chat room abrevations..
.
14
Our Parent..... 2
My story 5
A Nap 2
Cold Weather 1
Brain Like Rain 3
Fading 1
Flickering Shadows 2
Prayers...... 3
just 1
MY DREAM 0
YOU CALLED 1
FORGIVENESS 3
Fire With Color 7
ME AGAIN! 2
NULL & VOID 1
Winter Day 5
Then,There,No
w,Future?
2
MarionYost 3
SISTERS & BROTHERS 2
Questions not as it seems 3
My Heart 3
Blackfoot 2
Insperation 2
White........
.......
2
Nonners' 2
Rygar..... 2
Speachless 0
Speachless 4
THIS FANTASY 1
INK....... 3
Kool 1
SILVER VRS. GOLD 1
MISTYNIGHTS 1
Lord 3
Infectious Talk 5
Hold on HOPE!!!!! 3
WAITING ON LOVE 3
I Died 8
Consumed Me....... 0
.............
...AWAY......
.
1
Faded Dreams 2
10,000 ways to say nothing..... 3
MEMORIES,WORD
S,STORIES
1
Family 0
NO_MATTER WHAT I SAY 1
HOLD ON 1
!!!!!!!!!RED!
!!!!!!!
1
Molded Me......... 3
Obsession 3
A STORY 0
RANDOM 5
Empty But Full 5
THIS YOU CAN"T SEE 5
MY JOB 1
JUST THOUGHT 5
CHRISTMAS TO ME NOW 6
REDBLOODINK 7
LIGHT SIDE 2
BAD DAY!!!!! 3
WAITING ON SANTA 5
I MISS HER 5
MY PARENT 3
TWO SIDES OF ME 8
I AWAKE 2
IN TOO ME 1
ALONE 6
THE NEED 3
TRUST 1
((( UNFOLDING))) 3
THOUGHT 1
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!DEAR GOD!!!!!!!!!!
7
HOPE 2
SECRETS 7
COLD AS STEEL 3
LIFE 8
Different 9