Destorted

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  • Life

    Destorted

    Melting trees.......
    Melting colors.....
    Reflections of me....
    Memories poor.....


              I fight pain.....


    A melting in my mind....
    In hopes of the.....

              Words left behind......


    So you think....
    So you wounder...
    I might blink....
    A thought to pounder...!


               Memories destorted.....
    A faded story..
    Things aborted...
    Miserere!


    Why?
    Oh why?



     

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    MarionYost commented on Destorted

    01-10-2010

    Wow, this is awesome Red! God, I should never stay away from your page this long.. I've missed SO much... Playing catch up FINALLY. Great write all the best -Marion-

    redbloodink

    01/10/2010

    ty Marion.... I'm just thankful that you and so many of the others enjoy my writes...... The talent that you and the others inspire me so much write on everyone.... red

    tcmckinney commented on Destorted

    01-01-2010

    Very real in social life...very clear and subjective to translation for many..well done

    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Tc......... for your comments..... means so much to me that I inspire and touch so many here like yourself.....

    chalkout91 commented on Destorted

    12-28-2009

    i cant tell you how much this poem reminded me of my life and how even people ive known my whole life are just there and just faces. Everyday used to seem like it was the same but theyve changed a lot recently and i dont ask why anymore kinda just see the blur as a blackout. a hole i needed to pull myself out of.

    redbloodink

    12/28/2009

    I hope it help Chalk.....

    thedog commented on Destorted

    12-27-2009

    thats diep woman but i fill you iv been there too xoxo andrew

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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