TRUST

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TRUST

I'm in a spot of who to trust.....
I've made a few friends.....
but that was a bust......
well that's life...... love and bends....

when we get hurt.....
it's hard to trust......
I want to flirt.....
but it seems to go a bust.....

I will never stop looking for her.....
I'm fixing to live a lone.......
I hope life don't become a blurrrrrrr.....
In my new home.........

I need the alone time......
But I need some share time.......
I need a lady......
That will love me.......

Will she come around.......
Will she just want to sit and talk......
Will we know what we have found......
And then make the walk......

Down the hall.... of love......
To the great world of embrace.......
I'm needing her I's and me's......
Is she looking for these.....

My feelings my heart my soul......
Just as well her's will matter......
A love that will truely grow.......
Instead of becomming a big ole splatter....

against the wall........
for us both to feel the pain......
of what was once love......
right down the hall..........

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petra commented on TRUST

12-08-2009

nice one, I read several, but chose this to comment on, b/c some feel like u were bored and spat something out quickly. but this one seems well thought out and is well-written. Nice job!

redbloodink

12/08/2009

well ty Petra it was well writen Not sure about thought... but it came to be about my ex wife....

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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((( UNFOLDING))) 3
THOUGHT 1
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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