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    the moon hung upon the night sky... the stars looked like they were twinkling eyes... The reflection on the water.... golden shinny silver..... it seemed like you were right there.... A memory a thought ... to take me back there.... where we use to sit.... on the banks of the shore.... I hope one day I have this and more......



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    MindNumbing commented on free-style

    02-08-2010

    This is beautiful... Very visual in all its simplicity... thanks for sharing

    redbloodink

    02/08/2010

    ty Mind... your comments are appreciated......

    labitch commented on free-style

    02-08-2010

    i like this! it's short, but direct. I love the i hope some day i have this and more line!!

    redbloodink

    02/08/2010

    ty la glad you like it....

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    redbloodink’s Poems (211)

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    I once was 2
    A Silent Shot 9
    I Find it, in My Mind 4
    A Freezing Night!!!!!! under Your moon light 3
    THANKS-GIVING 3
    Other Fashion 2
    Mankind!!!!!!
    !!
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    I Refuse 5
    Book 2 2
    A BOOK 9
    Last One 4
    Realize 1
    Twist of Faith 1
    Race of Faith.......! 0
    If all I had to say 1
    Never Die........( I'm just saying ) 0
    A real Human 1
    And That Is That! 6
    What's a Crappy Day 5
    Soles of the Streets 1
    The Heavens 1
    Heard the Call 1
    FOREVER TOGETHER! 2
    Writting Away 1
    Am I 1
    What More 2
    Away 4
    Healed Me 3
    Inside-Out 3
    Elated 4
    The Cat 4
    Do You? 1
    Is She 4
    The God Zone 1
    Up Early 4
    Not Me 4
    Popular 2
    ABBA 2
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    Define Work..... 5
    Bleed for the Need 6
    No pain behind my walls 2
    !I DO! 3
    Time 2
    Haircondition
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    My Heart 4
    LOSS OF LOVE 2
    My Every-thing..
    .......
    1
    BAD DREAM 2
    Redefine 1
    Intense 4
    My Goal 8
    I FIND 2
    ERASED THIS 9
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    STRINGS 5
    Imperfect Human 15
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    (((((((((( UNFOLDING )))))))) REVISED 4
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    YOUR TIME 5
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    LIL" SONG 0
    TOO SEE 3
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    ALL ALONE 5
    REMEMBER 5
    FIND 3
    TTOTA,the trip of them all! 3
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    I Say! 6
    Behind 4
    MISSED 4
    IT STINKS 6
    TWO 3
    FOR SURE 2
    DEMONS COME 5
    A Lovers Plea..... 7
    Time Continuum 2
    I Sit 2
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    BLANK 2
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    A Killer 7
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    STRAIGHT 4
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    OP.COM 2
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    DECISIONS!!!!
    !
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    Destorted 4
    HIS VOICE 4
    A Christmas Greeting.... 3
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    Take Me Back 2
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    My story 5
    A Nap 2
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    Brain Like Rain 3
    Fading 1
    Flickering Shadows 2
    Prayers...... 3
    just 1
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    YOU CALLED 1
    FORGIVENESS 3
    Fire With Color 7
    ME AGAIN! 2
    NULL & VOID 1
    Winter Day 5
    Then,There,No
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    SISTERS & BROTHERS 2
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    My Heart 3
    Blackfoot 2
    Insperation 2
    White........
    .......
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    Nonners' 2
    Rygar..... 2
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    THIS FANTASY 1
    INK....... 3
    Kool 1
    SILVER VRS. GOLD 1
    MISTYNIGHTS 1
    Lord 3
    Infectious Talk 5
    Hold on HOPE!!!!! 3
    WAITING ON LOVE 3
    I Died 8
    Consumed Me....... 0
    .............
    ...AWAY......
    .
    1
    Faded Dreams 2
    10,000 ways to say nothing..... 3
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    S,STORIES
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    NO_MATTER WHAT I SAY 1
    HOLD ON 1
    !!!!!!!!!RED!
    !!!!!!!
    1
    Molded Me......... 3
    Obsession 3
    A STORY 0
    RANDOM 5
    Empty But Full 5
    THIS YOU CAN"T SEE 5
    MY JOB 1
    JUST THOUGHT 5
    CHRISTMAS TO ME NOW 6
    REDBLOODINK 7
    LIGHT SIDE 2
    BAD DAY!!!!! 3
    WAITING ON SANTA 5
    I MISS HER 5
    MY PARENT 3
    TWO SIDES OF ME 8
    I AWAKE 2
    IN TOO ME 1
    ALONE 6
    THE NEED 3
    TRUST 1
    ((( UNFOLDING))) 3
    THOUGHT 1
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!DEAR GOD!!!!!!!!!!
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    HOPE 2
    SECRETS 7
    COLD AS STEEL 3
    LIFE 8
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