THE NEED

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THE NEED

I have felt the need......
I have felt the pain.....
I sit and bleed.......
In the rain......

The pain the pain......
That makes me bleed.....
The red blood and rain......
I sit and  plead.......

I beg of love.... not lust.....
I beg of all of this.......
Some-one too trust.....
And a simple little kiss.....

I sit and bleed... I sit and bleed....
A life a love and more......
Is she the one I need......
I'm unsure........

I sit and bleed in a puddle of rain.....
I sit and bleed I sit and bleed.....
I feel no-more pain......
But I still have a need......

The pain I feel I'm letting go......
The pain I live with as I bleed.....
Will I ever know......
Or will I just forever need......

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banginmoma commented on THE NEED

12-23-2009

a very heartfelt poem. i feel as if i am there feeling the same thing. but we can never give up on love. very intense and very well written

wamomo commented on THE NEED

12-19-2009

Mmmmm....very intensely written...i can almost see the anguished heart bleeding as you write this....lovely, red...

knight4696 commented on THE NEED

12-09-2009

A genuine heartfelt plea to find The One. It's a difficult search but one we all must take to find true inner peace and happiness. Both life and love can be so difficult and cruel ... But we must not give up on hope .. and maybe ...just maybe ..... Great write.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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