RANT

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this is a long rant of how some one try's to be little me cause I choose to be different and they can't stand it

RANT




Every waking moment.....
Everyday!
I'm trying not to feel.....
Useless and spent.....

Like I have for so long.....
I'm fighting this bullet.....
I'm always wrong....
To you I'm shit......

Your perfect acting....
Looking so smug....
We are all lacking............
I'd sleep out side with the bugs.....

You think .....
Spin your wheels................
I see it on your face!
Your evil thoughts,
My evil thoughts,
This steels!

So what will you think?

Later on.....

When you see me posing....

In what you call drag.....
You that say.....
I'm crazy and a fool....
When I become that fashion model..
Will you still say?
I'm just trying to make guys drool......
Your thoughts consume you.....
In all of your knowledge
....
Of thinking every-one is the same.......

Yes there is others kinda like me...
Yes there is others like you....
But only similar to a point.....
We were all made different....
In so many ways....
Still you go on thinking....
Every-one should be like you....

Perfect in your own ways and thoughts...
You break people down....
Make them feel inferior....
Why?

Is it because you never measured up....
To what you thought you could be.............
Is it because you just love your own misery?
Answer me.... Answer yourself...
Why can't you listen?
And just be happy!
                                                   red

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Artie commented on RANT

03-21-2010

It's crazy if you think about it - we live in a world of people who want you to be like them, but they don't wan't to be like anyone else. Being yourself is never easy, but always important so live on - Nice purge - 10 from me

redbloodink

03/21/2010

as always Artie ty for the comments to push on and just to be me........ red

dumplin commented on RANT

03-14-2010

It's a shame you take so personally how haters think. You should focus on the ppl around you who love you for your heart and not what you look like or dress like. I know several like you and they are the sweetest ppl I know!

redbloodink

03/14/2010

this is not personal Dumplin........ I just wrote this in hopes others would read it and then think before they make a comment or think about how they treat some one that looks or acts different.... cause we are all different...... red

Teardrops commented on RANT

03-13-2010

red my dear friend if they dont like who you are then they are not worth your time i am a ageing cowgirl who still irdes rodeo so i love it the heck with who can not accept it even my daughter . be yourself for you are the one you have to answer to . You are a gifted poet with a wonderful life live it Marie

redbloodink

03/14/2010

awe Tear this is what I mean..... you come up with the most beautiful comments to keep me walking in the direction I need too........... red

earthly commented on RANT

03-12-2010

oh Red-you are who you are and thats wonderful-each of us are unique and special-namaste...earthly

redbloodink

03/12/2010

ty Earthly..................................................

Rhymer commented on RANT

03-12-2010

The emotions run strong through out this poem. If someone is holding you back move on, it's important to strive to reach our dreams. If I could rate it would be a 10.

redbloodink

03/12/2010

ty Rhymer..........................................

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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