FIND

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FIND





One-more time!
Do it again!
What did you say!
I'm just telling ya!


I missed it!
Didn't hear right!
My voice is loud!
But one-more time!

Say it so I can hear!
Tonight!
Wisper in my ear!
I'm on cloud!


            NINE!

                  

               One-more time!
                          .................. Just another moan!
                                                                          Drop to the next line!





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And it's me you'll!

FIND!






















 


             

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viejay04 commented on FIND

03-09-2010

Great job, Red! Another masterpiece! Love, viejay0

redbloodink

03/09/2010

not sure about a master piece but ty Viejay for reading and commenting my writes....

MarionYost commented on FIND

02-25-2010

This is awesome. That's all there is to say. (Chants) WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! Great job! All the best -Marion-

redbloodink

02/25/2010

*blushing* I bet as i comment back ty Marion..... more what writes i bet they will come ty again

soulwriter commented on FIND

02-25-2010

Well crafted, floats along like a verbal cloud... I Found this a 10 for emotional creativity!

redbloodink

02/25/2010

ty Soul ... that was crafted by so many thoughts over the last year..... some things said some things thought and much more.... red

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

redbloodink’s Poems (211)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Let Me ....... Share .... Care and write again.... 7
Night or Day 1
I once was 2
A Silent Shot 9
I Find it, in My Mind 4
A Freezing Night!!!!!! under Your moon light 3
THANKS-GIVING 3
Other Fashion 2
Mankind!!!!!!
!!
5
I Refuse 5
Book 2 2
A BOOK 9
Last One 4
Realize 1
Twist of Faith 1
Race of Faith.......! 0
If all I had to say 1
Never Die........( I'm just saying ) 0
A real Human 1
And That Is That! 6
What's a Crappy Day 5
Soles of the Streets 1
The Heavens 1
Heard the Call 1
FOREVER TOGETHER! 2
Writting Away 1
Am I 1
What More 2
Away 4
Healed Me 3
Inside-Out 3
Elated 4
The Cat 4
Do You? 1
Is She 4
The God Zone 1
Up Early 4
Not Me 4
Popular 2
ABBA 2
O.P. INSPIREATION 7
Define Work..... 5
Bleed for the Need 6
No pain behind my walls 2
!I DO! 3
Time 2
Haircondition
er vs Airconditione
r
4
My Heart 4
LOSS OF LOVE 2
My Every-thing..
.......
1
BAD DREAM 2
Redefine 1
Intense 4
My Goal 8
I FIND 2
ERASED THIS 9
Mistress vs. Slave 9 4
Mistress vs. Slave 8 8
STRINGS 5
Imperfect Human 15
Mistress vs. Slave # 7 1
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 6 3
(((((((((( UNFOLDING )))))))) REVISED 4
MISTRESS vs. SLAVE # 5 2
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 4 3
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 3 5
Obscure 3
back again and is still here 1
Is still here 2
THE HOUR GLASS ( of the sands ) 2
YOU_SEE 8
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE 7
RANT 6
i try 3
!INDIFFERENT! 4
YOUR TIME 5
Comic Book 2
Pass By 0
EROTIC NIGHT 4
LIL" SONG 0
TOO SEE 3
Faith not Religion 7
ALL ALONE 5
REMEMBER 5
FIND 3
TTOTA,the trip of them all! 3
not done because 2
I Say! 6
Behind 4
MISSED 4
IT STINKS 6
TWO 3
FOR SURE 2
DEMONS COME 5
A Lovers Plea..... 7
Time Continuum 2
I Sit 2
Poetic Justice 5
Mistress vs. Slave 12
free-style 4
LOVE! after drinking.....
.
6
EACH_OTHER 8
MANY BLESSINGS 4
Faceless they become 5
COMMENTS & WRITINGS 3
YOURS' OR MINE 2
BLANK 2
LOVE DANCE! 6
FLY AWAY 5
A Killer 7
EROTIC TONIGHT 5
WINDOW OF TIME 4
Hundred 4
RUN WAY 2
BOLD 7
SOUL 2
Take 5
It's Love 2
Found Love..... 3
OriginalPoetr
y.Com
4
YET or NOT YET 2
STRAIGHT 4
MISTAKEN ALL HER LIFE 6
( Heard ) They must of....... 3
OP.COM 2
JUST STOPPED 4
what 5
DECISIONS!!!!
!
4
Destorted 4
HIS VOICE 4
A Christmas Greeting.... 3
Decisions of Frustration Frustrating 3
Blanket 5
Take Me Back 2
Chat room abrevations..
.
14
Our Parent..... 2
My story 5
A Nap 2
Cold Weather 1
Brain Like Rain 3
Fading 1
Flickering Shadows 2
Prayers...... 3
just 1
MY DREAM 0
YOU CALLED 1
FORGIVENESS 3
Fire With Color 7
ME AGAIN! 2
NULL & VOID 1
Winter Day 5
Then,There,No
w,Future?
2
MarionYost 3
SISTERS & BROTHERS 2
Questions not as it seems 3
My Heart 3
Blackfoot 2
Insperation 2
White........
.......
2
Nonners' 2
Rygar..... 2
Speachless 0
Speachless 4
THIS FANTASY 1
INK....... 3
Kool 1
SILVER VRS. GOLD 1
MISTYNIGHTS 1
Lord 3
Infectious Talk 5
Hold on HOPE!!!!! 3
WAITING ON LOVE 3
I Died 8
Consumed Me....... 0
.............
...AWAY......
.
1
Faded Dreams 2
10,000 ways to say nothing..... 3
MEMORIES,WORD
S,STORIES
1
Family 0
NO_MATTER WHAT I SAY 1
HOLD ON 1
!!!!!!!!!RED!
!!!!!!!
1
Molded Me......... 3
Obsession 3
A STORY 0
RANDOM 5
Empty But Full 5
THIS YOU CAN"T SEE 5
MY JOB 1
JUST THOUGHT 5
CHRISTMAS TO ME NOW 6
REDBLOODINK 7
LIGHT SIDE 2
BAD DAY!!!!! 3
WAITING ON SANTA 5
I MISS HER 5
MY PARENT 3
TWO SIDES OF ME 8
I AWAKE 2
IN TOO ME 1
ALONE 6
THE NEED 3
TRUST 1
((( UNFOLDING))) 3
THOUGHT 1
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!DEAR GOD!!!!!!!!!!
7
HOPE 2
SECRETS 7
COLD AS STEEL 3
LIFE 8
Different 9