YOUR TIME

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YOUR TIME



Take your time......
To write a poem.....
Take your time......
To move to the next line....


                          What if they flow....
                                    From you like a fountain....
                            I don't know....
                                    Nothing is for certain....


I feel the words down inside.....
Comming up from the pits....
Of my soul.....
Like a cry.....


                            The thoughts I put away....
                         The pen meets the paper....
                                  I never know what to say....
                             Is this write a keeper....?

I think not all the time.....
I write just to feel sane!
What will become of the next rhyme...
Will it become some-thing to bring fame....

          
                               Not at all what I'm looking for....
                    The letters that bring it all together.....
                         I'm never quit sure......
                                 Will these writes ever weather...


The test of time......
Reach out to many.....
Just a simple little rhyme.....
I never take the time.....
They are just there and ready.......




                                        red

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neosoul commented on YOUR TIME

03-13-2010

write what you feel...say what you want to say...the wrords are yours--- some see the light of day others stay hidden... great work-- i enjoyed reading your pieces. thank you for sharing!

redbloodink

03/14/2010

well ty Soul we all need to share and release thoughts feelings and who we are to move on in life..... red

blackfootlady commented on YOUR TIME

03-10-2010

I really loved point of view Red.Thats just it and you said it well.Very nice write....Churv

redbloodink

03/10/2010

Churv....... ty for all your kind words,friendship, and comments...... red

dahlusion commented on YOUR TIME

03-10-2010

This is so truthful. I write about 20 poems per week and keep only two or three, the others I burn...I do not believe in writer's block; my feeling is: if you can't write, then you simply have nothing to say for the moment.

redbloodink

03/10/2010

WoW Dah, your comment was true............ for what you got... I love the comments from all because we all see things differently....... red

mustascheman commented on YOUR TIME

03-10-2010

Hey Red.. You're right..sometimes sitting in front of any empty page or blank screen can be intimidating. Something usually flows out eventually. This reminds me of a poem I wrote quite a number of years ago, I have it posted on my page, I believe I entitled it 'Empty Pages'. Check it if you want. Anywho, I enjoyed this poem, well done.

redbloodink

03/10/2010

ty Mustas...... I will read it some time ok........ red

alb29oclfl commented on YOUR TIME

03-09-2010

thanks for the smile, the more complicated our lives the harder it becomes to find a reason to smile

redbloodink

03/09/2010

ty Al ....... and I'm glad it made you smile.....

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

redbloodink’s Poems (211)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Let Me ....... Share .... Care and write again.... 7
Night or Day 1
I once was 2
A Silent Shot 9
I Find it, in My Mind 4
A Freezing Night!!!!!! under Your moon light 3
THANKS-GIVING 3
Other Fashion 2
Mankind!!!!!!
!!
5
I Refuse 5
Book 2 2
A BOOK 9
Last One 4
Realize 1
Twist of Faith 1
Race of Faith.......! 0
If all I had to say 1
Never Die........( I'm just saying ) 0
A real Human 1
And That Is That! 6
What's a Crappy Day 5
Soles of the Streets 1
The Heavens 1
Heard the Call 1
FOREVER TOGETHER! 2
Writting Away 1
Am I 1
What More 2
Away 4
Healed Me 3
Inside-Out 3
Elated 4
The Cat 4
Do You? 1
Is She 4
The God Zone 1
Up Early 4
Not Me 4
Popular 2
ABBA 2
O.P. INSPIREATION 7
Define Work..... 5
Bleed for the Need 6
No pain behind my walls 2
!I DO! 3
Time 2
Haircondition
er vs Airconditione
r
4
My Heart 4
LOSS OF LOVE 2
My Every-thing..
.......
1
BAD DREAM 2
Redefine 1
Intense 4
My Goal 8
I FIND 2
ERASED THIS 9
Mistress vs. Slave 9 4
Mistress vs. Slave 8 8
STRINGS 5
Imperfect Human 15
Mistress vs. Slave # 7 1
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 6 3
(((((((((( UNFOLDING )))))))) REVISED 4
MISTRESS vs. SLAVE # 5 2
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 4 3
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 3 5
Obscure 3
back again and is still here 1
Is still here 2
THE HOUR GLASS ( of the sands ) 2
YOU_SEE 8
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE 7
RANT 6
i try 3
!INDIFFERENT! 4
YOUR TIME 5
Comic Book 2
Pass By 0
EROTIC NIGHT 4
LIL" SONG 0
TOO SEE 3
Faith not Religion 7
ALL ALONE 5
REMEMBER 5
FIND 3
TTOTA,the trip of them all! 3
not done because 2
I Say! 6
Behind 4
MISSED 4
IT STINKS 6
TWO 3
FOR SURE 2
DEMONS COME 5
A Lovers Plea..... 7
Time Continuum 2
I Sit 2
Poetic Justice 5
Mistress vs. Slave 12
free-style 4
LOVE! after drinking.....
.
6
EACH_OTHER 8
MANY BLESSINGS 4
Faceless they become 5
COMMENTS & WRITINGS 3
YOURS' OR MINE 2
BLANK 2
LOVE DANCE! 6
FLY AWAY 5
A Killer 7
EROTIC TONIGHT 5
WINDOW OF TIME 4
Hundred 4
RUN WAY 2
BOLD 7
SOUL 2
Take 5
It's Love 2
Found Love..... 3
OriginalPoetr
y.Com
4
YET or NOT YET 2
STRAIGHT 4
MISTAKEN ALL HER LIFE 6
( Heard ) They must of....... 3
OP.COM 2
JUST STOPPED 4
what 5
DECISIONS!!!!
!
4
Destorted 4
HIS VOICE 4
A Christmas Greeting.... 3
Decisions of Frustration Frustrating 3
Blanket 5
Take Me Back 2
Chat room abrevations..
.
14
Our Parent..... 2
My story 5
A Nap 2
Cold Weather 1
Brain Like Rain 3
Fading 1
Flickering Shadows 2
Prayers...... 3
just 1
MY DREAM 0
YOU CALLED 1
FORGIVENESS 3
Fire With Color 7
ME AGAIN! 2
NULL & VOID 1
Winter Day 5
Then,There,No
w,Future?
2
MarionYost 3
SISTERS & BROTHERS 2
Questions not as it seems 3
My Heart 3
Blackfoot 2
Insperation 2
White........
.......
2
Nonners' 2
Rygar..... 2
Speachless 0
Speachless 4
THIS FANTASY 1
INK....... 3
Kool 1
SILVER VRS. GOLD 1
MISTYNIGHTS 1
Lord 3
Infectious Talk 5
Hold on HOPE!!!!! 3
WAITING ON LOVE 3
I Died 8
Consumed Me....... 0
.............
...AWAY......
.
1
Faded Dreams 2
10,000 ways to say nothing..... 3
MEMORIES,WORD
S,STORIES
1
Family 0
NO_MATTER WHAT I SAY 1
HOLD ON 1
!!!!!!!!!RED!
!!!!!!!
1
Molded Me......... 3
Obsession 3
A STORY 0
RANDOM 5
Empty But Full 5
THIS YOU CAN"T SEE 5
MY JOB 1
JUST THOUGHT 5
CHRISTMAS TO ME NOW 6
REDBLOODINK 7
LIGHT SIDE 2
BAD DAY!!!!! 3
WAITING ON SANTA 5
I MISS HER 5
MY PARENT 3
TWO SIDES OF ME 8
I AWAKE 2
IN TOO ME 1
ALONE 6
THE NEED 3
TRUST 1
((( UNFOLDING))) 3
THOUGHT 1
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!DEAR GOD!!!!!!!!!!
7
HOPE 2
SECRETS 7
COLD AS STEEL 3
LIFE 8
Different 9