Empty But Full

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    Empty But Full

    The Antics of Life



    Life and what we see.....
    Is it something we can conceive?
    Is it just the thought of living...
    Or just being?


    Life is more to me then breathing.......


    Life has to be something great...
    I've felt it.......
    Even one the emptiest of dates....


    A feeling of thoughts...
    Run wild through you're head....
    Believe it or not...
    You're not dead....

    The drugs....
    The pills...
    They never killed you...


    The thought of emptiness did........


    But you weren't empty...
    Not even from birth...
    Didn't you even know....
    How much you are worth...?


    You barrowed and stoled...
    Even cheated yourself....
    Then you got old....,
    even then you weren't...
    bye yourself...


    So look up and smile you!!!

    There is so much more...
    You can do....

    See and you thought...
    Emptiness enveloped you!!!

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    kpeery09 commented on Empty But Full

    12-18-2009

    very nice...I like the ryhm in this one...its very good...I give you 10.
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    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Kp...........

    TCpoeboy commented on Empty But Full

    12-07-2009

    I knew from the title the metaphor would enchant my mental state. Well done well written.
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    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Tc........ I try hard with my writing to make people think....

    MarionYost commented on Empty But Full

    12-04-2009

    wow, How in the hell can you be so inspiring??? You're talented as hell, I enjoy reading your material. Thanks for sharing all the best -Marion-
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    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Marion........ I think it's awesome you and so many others find my writes inspiring....

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Empty But Full

    11-30-2009

    How many times people go through life missing out because they are blind to what is in front of them ,yet can not see what the outcome could be . Great Job .You did it again.
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    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty Betty........ It's true we can miss it and then it can hit us like a hammer later.....

    dawnjyc commented on Empty But Full

    11-29-2009

    Sometimes we never see what is right in front of us, until it is to late. Great message of unbiased love and good work on the poem.
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    redbloodink

    11/29/2009

    ty Dawn.....

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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