Destined For An Early Grave

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    scolding older men for their bad choices in women

    Destined For An Early Grave

    You old men and your prostate problems
    think younger women will help you solve them

    Risking heart attacks by taking a blue pill
    knowing the side effects can make you ill

    But nonetheless you choose to risk your life
    instead of having an old woman for you wife

    Your sex appeal diminished yet to satisfy your hunger
    you try to keep up with women twenty years younger

    This type of behavior will get you in an early grave
    and apparently you think this makes you brave

    Its better for your health to choose life over lust
    and having a woman there who deserves your trust

    I know its your life and you'll live it as you see fit
    and this piece wont change your mind so I'll quit

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