Dreams

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Dreams

Hands shaking I awake my dream had been so real. Wishing for realness and love he always come to my dreams.  His hands were caressing and my breath was quickening as he layed me down on the bed. His face was covered and I could not see. But I knew he wasn't a real man for me. 
Each night he appears this man of my dreams but I know he isn't real. His hands may caress but my mind is a mess for he is not real to me.
There is no such thing as a man of this stature waiting there for me, for he was once alive you see.
His face may be covered, but his eyes are blue and his body is telling me just how good it can feel to fall in love with a man if only in my dream.

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HarverTomsson commented on Dreams

12-13-2009

Dreeam or nightmare? A midnight visitor that had once been alive? Hmmm, dead men tell no tales, except in your dreams. A brisk, if slightly macbre whoosh of estrogen exhale. Nice to see the man of your dreams has blue eyes, though! LOL HT

justastar2 commented on Dreams

10-30-2009

Oh if it weren't for dreams! Good job! This has good imagery and flow. Makes you want to crawl back in bed.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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